it was an interesting read waiting for further chapters and kinda excited to see how this hero falls and becomes a villian keep it up
author is stupid, mc is stupid. the story is as inconsistent as the mc with his goals. too many unnecessary plot and plotholes. author forces mc to look cool but not quite making it right.
I love the story so far and I'm all cought up, but i need more
It's early in the story to write reviews, but it's also happening quickly.The story seems interesting, maybe like a cliche start but I have a feeling that you are a beginner at writing.The fights were nice, simple, not too long and you didn't include unnecessary long dialogs.You should definitely improve character design, what are Leyce, Kagusuchi Akane and that guy from academy like, what do they look like etc (same goes to the world where he is, but also his old world).Besides that, everything seems fine so far, I really hope that the story will have some interesting plots to it.
So i don‘t really write rewiews But i need to say this, how Comes that every single review on this novel is good? The Mc is literaly a slave to a girl that abuses Him since the very second, and what does he do? Nothing, he accepts the abuse he accepst that he Is literaly a slave to that girl didn‘t think twice about it, and what I don‘t Understand even more is, why does he call her „Master“?!? She can‘t understand his Words (Nobody can he just groans and we see what he says) and Eventhought that he is calling her „Master“ every single time, doesn‘t matter if she is next to him or if ge is alone, he just goes like „Oh her skill calls me Eternal Servant? Guess I‘m her slave than. What she abuses me and literaly Cut my arm of my body, throwes it away and continue abusing me because I can‘t find it alone? Guess that seems pretty normal I‘m her slave after all“ Ok after that rant, can‘t say much more about it I read the first 6 chapters and skimed throught a couple more just to see if something Changes (Spoiler warning No nothing changes) So maybe some like a slave Mc that gets abused every second of the novel, I don‘t so 1/5 stars Character design, the rest 3/5 Star, can’t say much more about it, because like I said I just Did read 6 chapters and skimed throught a couple more.Is more a warning for the ones that don‘t want to read about a abused slave Mc, that didn‘t have any hope of escape because of the skill From the Female Lead
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Good in the start but now after NTR no thanks ... I hope you Rewriting because you writing is good it feel bad you take bad reviews when you are good writier
This book is simply too good to not read, especially because the author might just make you an offer you can't refuse. Read before it's too late!
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It started out p good until the mc gets reincarnated in a different world (for the second time). Then it drops off, also the system is annoying asf like fr It shocks him taking out health whenever it doesn't like what he is doing. After saying all that though, I would say that the writing quality is good and some ppl might enjoy the plot, so good luck author, however I don't think I will continue reading this.
Honestly a rough read. The events don't really flow together, it seems to cut and jump. MC gets to do whatever he feels like because he is the MC. I think he could even be considered a Mary Sue
An early review,even for me but this book deserves it. An intense action packed start, followed by more action that don't feel forced. Like you legit know why a fight must break out in a chapter and the reasons are sensible too. Don't even get me started on the fight scenes themselves. This guy can describe the best fight scenes ever. I've read my vampire system and other great books and I know how some of these books don't satisfy the reader's thirst for more action. Well,this guy solves that problem easily and makes you feel like your spectating the fight in person. Just amazing. This book is definitely gonna be big. I can tell.