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Hi, I like your word building author. It's easy to understand and of course, the choice of words. It is really better to use easy to understand terms. Gosh, this is excellency!
like everything so far, the world background is very interesting and a little unique and the power system that we are exposed to at this point, 20 chapters, is also interesting. The MC at this point seems to be a normal intelligent character. lastly if you are expecting much adult content, their will probably not be much for at least another 30 chapters or so as our mc is still only 5 at this point.
The premise is cool and not having a system/translation instantly bumps it up for me
I have read all the freely available chapters, and here’s my review: it’s very cringeworthy, cliché, and boring—all three at once. It also feels very AI like. There are even lines that say, "this changes everything." Most people familiar with AI novels recognize what this means; it feels like a literal copy paste from an AI-generated story.Also if my review gets deleted, I am directly reporting this author. (previous one got deleted)
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
这句话表达了对一本书的高度评价，并希望将其改编为电视剧。这种想法表明，书籍的内容丰富且引人入胜，以至于读者希望看到它被视觉化呈现。改编为电视剧可以让更多人接触到书中的故事和思想，进一步扩大其影响力。
First book here. So please take it easy on meNo ntr No yuri
not really bad but I still can't find what special from this novel, it's readable tho, the writing is really good and there's a lot explanation in another language, if you bored and have nothing to read this could be your reads
I wasn't even able to read a full chapter. And to be honest, it was due in a very large part, to the many numerous punctuation mistakes in just the first few paragraphs. It almost makes me think as though this was made using some type of ai writing software. And if I were the author of this, which thank heavens I am not, then I would seriously think about doing a complete rethink and rewrite of this story. But until then, I am leaving this review, as a way let others know, that until this story is either improved to where no clear punctuation mistakes or made, or it is completely rewritten. Then do yourself a favor, and don't read it until one of the two aforementioned things in this review or done.
Chapters are getting better... Keep writing please
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??