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"I never thought you'd eventually end up with her" Han Tengfei mumbled after remembering everything about Hou Wei Yan.
She had a smirk all over her face.
"I'm not going to rely on some sissy system, what's the fun in life if I can't even solve such a simple problem by myself, unless I don't have a choice I will never plan to use you ever again."
"Hey guys, how about we search for clues at Burger Joint. Let's check if they started fixing anything yet," Chris said.
While holding it, the same thing happens but this time, different abilities were appearing.
In the end, I will die here. My eyelids were getting very heavy. Unable to fight it anymore, I closed my eyes.
"Gau Duzal! My name is Heist Scimitar. I'm a freshman tome maven that masters a phenomenal magic of Gravity and Speed." Heist introduced.
"Thank you for keeping me accompany, I really need that sleep, can't sleep at all last night."
Each and every single of the Shinobi looked on in shock as, instead of the bridge going up into dust in fire and glory, a massive column of water erupted from the ocean like a bomb had gone off.
Really poorly translated. The speech sounds really unnatural. The characters start to wax poetic about how great the mc is to set up the mc greatness instead of the author actually writing the character do anything special. The main character goes on a stupid power trip first thing. It's just a pathetic high word count story. There s so much needless description and useless over worded junk you can skim read the story and not miss anything. I'll label it a cash grab word count trash story.Poorly translated it seriously needs an editor.Junk world building.Trash character design.World background is just more word padding.
I recently finished reading "Percival's Peculiar Powers" and absolutely loved it! The magical world of Lunaspire Academy is richly detailed and incredibly immersive. The characters, especially Percival, Elara, and Rory, are well-developed and their adventures are full of excitement and intrigue. The plot twists kept me hooked, and the mystery of the Shrouded Halls added an extra layer of depth to the story. It's a fantastic read for anyone who enjoys a good magical adventure!
It's nice. I like the first chapters cause I'm quite fond of chess. I like the plot too, it's interesting. Keep up the good work.
