Really like how this is written. The MC is not dumb as others have stated but actually really brilliant. looking forward to reading more.
Good vivid descriptions. I feel like both God and sperm-drop. Just a touch of grammar corrections and a little 'show, don't tell' will make it more readable. 5 stars for the effort and I'm looking up to the future chapters. Salute to you, author!
Awesome. I finally found a new novel that makes me excited. I hope the system shop has something to help his first wife become more beautiful and increase her talent so she can cultivate. Also can the author please limit the number of wives he will have. I mean, having too many wives ain't too good either and it will be kinda frustrating for character development. Anyway all the best
Alright story, basically skipped all the chapters... I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. I mean the hero he travels with is already in the level 70s.... like wtf? We see no progression from the mc. It's like he is a little voice just floating along with the hero... I was waiting practically the whole story so far for the mc to go back to his "owner" the girl. I mean she is a newbie adventurer and is like level 10 or something. There would have been much progression from the mc and his companion then. We would see them grow together with the mc learning more about the world in the travels. He would acc gain levels etc. For me, the first couple of chapters were really weird with the father throwing away the ring to the random-ass happenings after. Then for me the story just becomes nothing. No progression for the mc no growth or anything just an extremely dull story with nothing happening. (for the mc) If the story was about the hero then it would be a bit more interesting but this isn't why I wanted to read the story. I came for the ring mc...
Obligatory one star review, I saw that the translator came into the review section asking people to stop giving one star reviews, so I figured I'd come and be spiteful because most of my favorite novels have been dropped before being finished so why not, right? Maybe if I was busy reading my favorite novels, I wouldn't have time to be spiteful. But now that I have so much free time....
Wow, this is actually a really good book! The story line is well thought out and interesting and the writing style is descriptive yet easy to understand. I think the author could work on giving the characters more depth but to he fair, this is clearly a plot-based book. Keep up the good work!
its looking nice. The storyline does look lil cliche but looking at the synopsis,I'm guessing there's still more to come.yes.i totally like the book.
Great book + +
I thought this seemed familiar, turns out there is a manga version of it.I need to write some extra characters huh, the manga seemed good so high hopes for the novel
Lmao I just love how you put a very vivid warning in the book description couldent have been more clear???very heated but I like the honesty.
Nice start! Your grammar and writing style are all top-notch! The synopsis was very interesting and hooked me on. Good job author! Keep it up!
From the interesting synopsis, the unique writing style, and the characters being introduced and written differently from each other, this novel has some really good setup in the first few chapters! I can't wait to continue reading!