This is an extremely well-written story with few to no grammar mistakes(as far as I can see) and has close to realistic world-building. The only flaw I would say is the lack of chapters.
Pleased to make acquaintance with this one-of-a-kind video game world. It's kind of pushed to tiny details I would never think about. Obviously, the author knows how to make his universe evolve, the world is simple to understand, there are no cascade of new names to learn at once, this is quite enjoyable!
Pretty good, now I give five stars to any novel I like because there are few and far in between. I will have to admit this novel pretty good but my only problem is the harem. Great job author-San keep up the great work!
Grammars not bad but can still be improved other then that I hope you start releasing more chapters. I definitely where the story is headed
Story has a great start but from academy ark it became really boring, mc just a side character, he has less screen time from either one of his friends and enemies, i'm currently at chapter 206 and i can't read it further.From what i see he would be a side character, or one of many mc in his own slice of life story. Why i think so? because he wants to travel with his friends in the future.So if you like story with several mc's, you would like this story, if not it would be boring and a waste of time.It has a great start though, i really liked it.
If this VR game is actually connected to reality like other VR novels: 'I Became the Ultimate Boss', then It will be very interesting since that means MC will also become a god in reality (or at least can affect the real world). But if MC's godhood is only in VR then, meh... I am already bored with those pure VR genres where MC only shines inside VR.
Good novel it gives good experience. . ............. .. .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
this junk fire
funny as hell. hope this get selected.....................................................................................................................
I've seen this on Twitter as soon to be shooting. When I searched a little, I found that this was written by the same person as MDZS so... I had to read it. The story is quite nice, flowing full of realistic human emotions and struggles.
The writing style is very detailed and direct. the plot is intriguing and will have you begging to read more. This is a very unique story so far.
Our man Lin Fan is back with more bullsh*t, posturing, and hijinks. Coupled with immortality and a system to help him become invincible, what could go wrong?He gets points from killing and can roll a gacha for items or skills and can also level up those skills.From dying, cultivating, and consuming pills, he gets exp which can be used to breakthrough.He feels no pain and uses his system to his advantage to reap benefits and trick others.In conclusion, it was a very fun read. Lin Fan just goes around doing whatever he can to get stronger. Of course there are some cliches but it is enjoyable nonetheless.