My Campus King: Royal Rivalry

We are not enemies, but friends. We must not be enemies. Though passion may have strained, it must not break our bonds of affection. The mystic chords of memory will swell when again touched, as surely they will be, by the better angels of our nature.

There is some grammatical mistakes but nothing that it is too evident and annoys the reader. I like it how the author seems to be improving his style as the chapters go on. If you stop at the beginning because it has some mistakes or author inexperience, you gonna regret because the novel becomes great after the chapter 20.

Our man Lin Fan is back with more bullsh*t, posturing, and hijinks. Coupled with immortality and a system to help him become invincible, what could go wrong?He gets points from killing and can roll a gacha for items or skills and can also level up those skills.From dying, cultivating, and consuming pills, he gets exp which can be used to breakthrough.He feels no pain and uses his system to his advantage to reap benefits and trick others.In conclusion, it was a very fun read. Lin Fan just goes around doing whatever he can to get stronger. Of course there are some cliches but it is enjoyable nonetheless.

loving it so far.keep it up. am excited to see where this goes.and I'm hoping to see the lady from the inn again

Writer's block, its a big huge whitish cube of blockism... I am blocked... srry

"What the hell is going on?" I heard a voice from my classmates asked  looking at the scene with wide-eyed