i just love this novel ..nowadays you get to see novel where mc is perverted or evil or indifferent or selfish and where in many novel pure family relationships is not there.so i like most in here is way mc family value relationship and mc too is a responsible and positive person so this novel has become my favorite.also i like it because of harem of course but grammar and lemon chapters are good too.i would recommend people to give it a try .and author please i hope you don't discontinue this novel.
This is really a good story. The world is vast, there are many races but the focus will be on humans for a long time, the system is very interesting, there are many mysteries and secrets, the protagonist is not an idiot. He is very young at the beginning and learns from his mistakes. By all indications, this is a work in which the harem will be good, it will not be forced with love at first sight and beauties to bring down kingdoms by throwing themselves at the protagonist's feet wherever he goes. The MC won't have burdens to carry, getting in his way or saving his partner from some lecherous young masters (at least for now). To be honest, the MC path is pretty lonely for a long time, don't expect a protagonist with friends. The MC is not a nice guy who goes out to save people, but if he can help someone and if it doesn't get in the way of his plans, he will.
I didn't like it (with mini spoilers): The author tends to exaggerate the information and explanations about some things and some people. Sometimes it gets a little tiring. About the first harem girl... it was weird. A 17 year old girl with a super seductive body falling in love and even setting up a scheme to "marry" a 12 year old boy. It's okay if he or she were 15, but that's not the case. The cultivation world is very cruel, we all know, but in this story, a good-hearted cultivator is a heavenly treasure. The quality of writing needs to improve.
5* :-)
I want to say this is a good novel, because I did enjoy reading it. However, all I actually read was about 15 chapters of the MC sitting around and simulating without actually doing anything, interspaced with 4 chapters of arrogant young master types. Flawed novel, good read. Anyone have the correct raws?
Good novel *master chief* ??..........................................................................................................
not exceptional but not mediocre either. The plot is interesting however it lacks a lot of information about the mc and his environment, which limits the immersion and sometimes gives the impression that the world is absurd.
the way of writing is giving a newbie author. the concept is nice and all but it does not give what supposed to be gave.
Writing quality: There are very few minor mistakes, the grammar is really good and you cannot really complain about itCharacter design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see moreStoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpieceUpdate stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for moreWorld background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics
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Just wowww... I enjoying to read this novel..I realy thank u for this gift..I just wanted to tell u that how much I really enjoyed to read this novel..thank u authour..Keep rocking ?..l really excited to what is next adventure..Pls let me know
Hello, author here. If you're reading this, then I do hope you try out the book. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.
First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!