Hello, this is the translated version of my novel so that it reaches another audience, English is not my main language and I am honest, I sometimes use a translator but I am going to use it as a challenge for myself.
If you like hyouka or spiral then this novel is for you.This novel is genuinely enjoying. I enjoy how writer create a problem and he build the solution for the problem. Character written is good. Main leading character and female leading character are so interesting. The begaining plot was normal. But from the 6th chapter it’s become more and more interesting. But I think writer should be careful about background world.
This is a review for an FO. I like your story cover
getting tired of this novel ...sorry author but this is stupid all his reasoning not destroying the high tower over and over again is stupid his life ,the lives of his love one's keep being in danger over and over again and he keep a passive approach towards it while he keeps dealing with bugs and cockroaches over and over again when the biggest cause of it all he just leaves them be im done over 500 chapters all he has to do is take control or deal/destroy the high tower and his problems will be lessens and he could focus on his tech but NO many sentimental reasons from his woman and he won't do it even when his woman die they somehow revive .magical realism my ass . this novel is like face slapping Chinese novel out there with magical BS that you won't understand you just have to ride along with such BS and logic especially MC's logic why he wont just take care of the biggest tumor the hightower where he can likely find most of his answer . sign here's the scenario for this novel if anyone wants to read . MC died and resurrected by someone or unknown idkMC finds out His former GF is alive/ resurrected MC went for Revenge on his killerMC build a techno cityMC gains knowledge that's behind all of those shts that happened to him and his GF is the hightowerMC almost lost his GF again because of high tower GF almost die because of satanMC went to revenge againMC gave his GF to japan to get treatedMC find out that his GF is being a damsel againMC almost lost his GF again and surprised its the high tower behind it all againand suprise his decision leave them be for nowMC went to war again in america with bugs and cockroaches and suprise behind it all is hightower againand your reader here is DONE wasted my time here sorry for a demoralizing comment i don't usually do this but its frustrating reading you MC and his logic you mask it a magical realism and him being overly cautious when in reality he can deal with them with ease given his technology and magic and cheat almost like a system
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It’s very interesting; the MC is truly OP. His luck is also incredibly high – WTF! He finds SSS items as if it’s nothing special. He must be blessed by the goddess of luck. Still, I find it quite entertaining. Even though he’s OP, there are still some cool fights. He’s also very lucky with women. Overall, I find the story very entertaining, and I’ll keep following it. I’m hoping for many more chapters.
How can this be published with 0 Chapters?
The book is currently at four chapters but it's undeniable that it's been fun reading this book ?❤️
They interrogated us, examined us as they want. Who the hell think they are?
"Your welcome desu."
Flint went inside, the office was full of trophies and medals. Some of them were from competitions and quite a number of them were for military service or for humanitarian help. At the end of the office behind the table sat Milo, he was clean as compared to yesterday and you wouldn't even guess that person looked like they were homeless yesterday.
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