Azel06
well l think the author is worthy it, still reading but the story development is so intriguing and the character design , detailed description of the scenes makes it more intriguing . l recommend it
It is a great book. I love rated 18 books as well so it fits well for me.
this is amazing please continue.........
This is pretty great story and I have never seen this kind of story for overr 200 chapters. It is not boring and every arc seems pretty sold. I love it. Thanks for the story.
At last someone picked it up. keep it up brother. I haven't finished until chapter 1282 yet because i wanted to binge read few hundred chapters. I hope you will continue translating.
is this written by ai? I kinda get the horrendous feeling, but i don't mind it as long as it is well edited
I love good storytelling of morally gray mafia guys. You’ll love and hate Sergio at the same time! Cannot wait for more—need to know what happens with Karlen, Ivanna, and Sergio!
nice and interesting one I'll be reviewing it
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Dear readers,I want to take a moment to thank you for embarking on this journey with me. As some of you may know, this story is a fresh beginning, a complete reinvention of what I once tried to create. The original work was filled with amateur mistakes—narrative flaws, plot inconsistencies, and a lack of originality that I simply could not ignore. With this new novel, I have poured my heart and soul into every word, bringing together all the tools and insights I’ve gathered over the years to build a fantasy world that feels vivid, immersive, and alive.Unlike the previous version, this story sets a deliberate pace. The first 150 chapters are dedicated to establishing a rich world full of complex characters, intriguing relationships, and perilous challenges that will test our protagonist, Raimon, at every turn. Each event, each piece of dialogue, serves to build a foundation that will sustain the narrative for the many adventures to come. It is a world I hope you can lose yourselves in, one with depth, beauty, and dangers that lurk in every shadow.I welcome any and all feedback. Your thoughts, whether praise or critique, are invaluable as they help me shape and refine this world. If, by chapter 80, you find that the story hasn’t met your expectations, I will understand if you choose to step away, and I sincerely apologize for any time you feel may have been wasted. But if this tale captures your imagination, I promise that the journey beyond will be worth every step.This novel has been in the making for over three years, and I am excited to share it with you. It is a story crafted with care and passion, and one that I hope will resonate with you as deeply as it does with me. We will explore not just the battles and victories of our protagonist but also the meaning of loyalty, courage, and sacrifice. There are countless adventures ahead, and Raimon's path is only just beginning.Thank you for your time, your attention, and your trust in my work. Let’s dive together into a world of magic, danger, and dreams.With gratitude,[BlueHanma]
I feel like the side character is more of the main character 777
Would gave it a 4 Star if Mc was not this dumb31.12.2021 - 01.01.2022For some they either are happy with their Familie and friends or alone and for others they are with their Familie and friends or alone but they are sad deep in their heart.
