Started okay, but overall the story is just lacking and tropish as well.Characters feel flat. The MC faces no struggles. Oh he got kidnapped?? Next chapter he escapes. Oh he gets chased. Next chapter he’s no longer chased. Etc.Honestly just a sort of eh novel. Everythign else is sort of okay. But it just isnt very dynamic. Okay for a short read
I like the story so far, but I seriously hope to god it doesn’t become another Necromancer story. Sadly it feels overdone, and i hope it goes in a different direction. Still would read nonetheless, but it would be a lot less interesting.
Okay, no romance but I love this book keep it up author love your work, great job for jotting this down !! Love the characters and the description keep this up, I highly recommend this novel.
This is a very good story author, I love the info that you share, it's not bland and confusing as other stories, I also live how you exain the scenery very much and gosh I love your mc too
i can tell from the start that this has good potential and I really hope that you bring it a long way. you can't really find the good eat and evolve style novels.
I really enjoyed reading this story so far and I have caught up all the way, I do think that people should give it a try. I'm not saying that it is perfect, but other than the annoying main character in the beginning which he just develops better as time goes on I really like the story. I find most of the side characters interesting and the story always keeps me engaged and even though he is slightly overpowered he is not just steamrolling through the other characters there are a lot of character that give him a tough time.
Keep up the good work author can wait for more.
Free chapter were edited to make it look good...after chapter 40 it became bad very fast...no editing at all...just mtl....just delete your translation group its just trash...you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a bad job
Good in-depth character and well-written background! a rare sight because most new novels have problems with that. all the best author san! please don't drop this.
I have to say I'm astonished to find such a well written story here on Webnovel. The amount of depth and quality in the writing of characters, world setting, and personality overall is amazing. This qualifies as a good story that I could see being published with a bit of tweaking, so I highly recommend this book to anyone who's tired of 1 dimensional characters and cardboard worlds with no depth. This book has amazing potential and I believe it's worth the wait for its updates.
Awesome job Author. Believe me or not, I just got completely immersed till three chapters, trying to figure out Carl then itself. The plot is totally interesting and wish you could take care of punctuation for better understanding. Your story has potential to reach up high. Best of luck and keep us entertaining with your amazing work.
The novel is still at its early stages, but I enjoy already the flow of the story. It maybe because it has a slow pace plot the reason that I enjoyed it, but I really like novels that has battles and strategies in place.
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