The grammar is pretty good, I like the concept of dream mourn and how his master leavess- looking forward to more chapters!RegardsBearateme_
After reading more chapters since our first review, it's safe to say things have taken an interesting change of pace.So, Morgan's ability to separate his soul seems to tell me that he's going to be extremely difficult to take down. That's not a negative thing. I just hope Sarthak knows about adaptability. The dialogue between characters isn't half bad, especially when it involves the MC.I feel like that narrative's a tad brisk and some scenes are melodramatic. There's no particular wronging in this, though, since the story's still in its initial stages. Like, Sarthak's world-building is commendable.Couldn't help but notice that his writing gets better with each new chapter released. It's engaging enough, and he delivers some solid descriptions for the action scenes. Makes the dialogue flow naturally.P.S. If I see the name "Cassius" one more time in a book, I'm closing it.
Great story, I really like it, I'm just honestly confused on the profession and class system because I've read up to ch. 95 and so far despite his 2 sss rank classes for mage and assassin, it seems like they give him next to nothing, the mage class gave him a token that he can't use yet and a perk while the assassin class only gave him a stat boost and while it was a massive stat boost it was a one time thing not a continual stat boost per level, they don't even give skills for their classes or anything, so I'm just confused on if im missing something or do the classes just not really do anything
Excellent writing quality, with vivid details presented and accentuated as if you were watching everything unfold right in front of you. Solid development of the world background and settings for a genuine apocalyptic story. The representation of the main character is quite relatable, as is the way the other characters interact throughout the novel.
Good start, I hope it takes off and continue.I love how the chapters are titled btw:)
As the author, I'm naturally inclined to give my own novel 5 stars, but I understand that only you, the readers, can truly decide if it lives up to that. I encourage you to dive into the story, form your own opinions, and share your thoughts.While the pace starts slow, it gradually picks up momentum after the first few chapters, so I hope you'll stick around to experience the unfolding journey. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'm always here to answer any questions you have. Happy reading, and I hope you enjoy the journey!
This is the type of story I like. No toxic relationship between FL and ML. ?❤️
Just makes you want to read more and more. This is so well written that I wasn't able to stop reading, the plot is really entertaining. The elements of system, and missions, are just so great and the flow, it's amazing. There are twists I didn't see coming and that makes me like the book more. Especially the main character, I liked him from the start. The world background is intriguing. It's just awesome.Great job, author!
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