Prerequisites for Greatness (RWBY)

just another 'beast master' story with the exact same plot as the rest of them..............................................................

I dropped the story after a good 3 chapters in, usually for most system novels you don't really feel that the MC deserves it i mean think about it, most of them never deserve it or have done something to really warrant it. BUT this self-righteous prick that is the main character really doesn't deserve it not to mention the fact his personality is as basic and overdone as these main characters can get in this type of story but my god is this son of a ***** boring and cliche. Personally, if you are a veteran in this sort of stuff and can distinguish originality from the cookie cutter garbage most authors regurgitate then you could tell two chapters in that this will bring little to no gratification to you. But if this is your first rodeo then, by all means, enjoy mediocrity.

Good start, good premise. The only problem is that your usage of the past tense is wrong, and i think you have this misconception that whenever something is in 3rd person perspective, everything will be written in past tense. That is not entirely correct. Anyway, i love the character development and the world building. Perhaps, spice up the story with some unexpected events.Good luck!

Pritty nice story so far and good gramer                                                                                            

Great sci-fi thriller with solid world building, The story is well paced and I enjoy the tiny scientific facts you slip in from time to time. Quite educational if you ask me. I love the mind bending time paradoxes which kinda makes the tenses confusing, which further makes it interesting and develop the plot.Your synopsis should've been longer so people will get a glimpse. It doesn't matter though, I'm glad I found this. Please write faster, I want to see where the story goes especially now that the heat is getting intense.

The first arc is really good, MC shows great leadership skills, leading a bunch of mortals to clear an asylum full of demons in the impossible level difficult.But then, the author destroyed this novel in the next 10 chapters. The MC needs a medallion to enter an order of knights to recover his missing eye and arm. He finds a woman who is selling the medallion for 1000 coins, that's the amount of her debt with loan sharks. He pays her debt but is afraid of asking for the medallion to not upset her. Then he gives a blank check to corrupt city guards, just for them not make things difficult for him.The woman he saves, who lives in the slums, who divides a room with 4 people, including a dead rotten body, who would become a slave together with her daughter, gets angry at the MC because he follows her, to make sure she gets home in safety, cause she's a widow and her reputation could suffer (he still had no courage to ask for the medallion).Seeing her living conditions, the MC picks his remaining money e gives to her, so she can find a better house to liveSo the badass rich MC of the last arc now has no money, no balls, no medallion e needs to find a job to survive.