Hello, as the author of this novel, I will give this one a five-star! You can ask anything regarding this novel in the comment below. Also, below are things that would happen in the novel: 1. MC would get a system when he is 18, before that he will be weak, but become overpowered once he has it.2. You can see the villain tag in it, but MC won't act villainous at the start of the novel, but he would do so after getting the system and wanting to take revenge. 3. So yes, no harem until the later chapter, but don't worry, the pace would be fast before MC got the system. 4. This novel will have more than 3 women in it. 5. Inc$st+Netori, but no Netorare and yuri.
This is your story so, knowing you im goona love it welcome back btw!!
Ask me anything you want to know about the story.So I saw some writers do that in ther books and liked the idea. So, you can use this comment to ask me any question.
pretty decent, could be better than that but mc isn't too cool, I don't like female leads so far and harem and 18 hashtags seem like a bait
Hey, I think the author already knows this, but I’ve rarely seen a web novel that conveys emotions this well. The concept is original, the narration is smooth, the interactions feel natural, and the drama is used perfectly. Honestly, I don’t understand how some other works can be more popular when their quality is so bad. I really hope you’ll continue your work because it’s one of the best I’ve read. I can’t afford the paid chapters for now, so I’ll just leave a review and give you my power stones regularly.
Nice and beautifully written. I'm curious about the Erana struggle. Looking forward to her next adventure and step. Nice work.It's a great book; a villain masterpiece pov. I really love her progression. Also love the character dynamics of the book.My heart emotions mixed up from the first chapter. It's made me couldn't stop to the next chapter. Ganbatte author, it's stunning journey.
I just finished reading Rebirth Of The Tycoon: I Shall Dominate The World, and it’s really noice. If you like business, power moves, and a smart MC, you should check it out!
One of the best starts of a novel in a long timeI am quite impressed seeing this quality of work from an amature writer. One rarely sees this level of writing skill and attention to detail in most novels. Its very difficult to make characters believable and alive and by the end of 39 there are 3 character I felt a human connect with the mc, his sister and mother. This is quite an accomplishment as many books are not even able to create a believable mc with 50+ characters. I genuinely felt empathy for these characters. I am not trying to glaze the author but I truly respect authors who are able to do this. I really hope this continues.I also appreciate how intresting the power mc has. Its not a typical system which gives everything to the mc for free. There is actually a cost to strength. And a believable way for mc to develope a more reserved personality. Finally I believe everyone should give this book a try and support the author. We can’t allow this hidden gem to go unnoticed any longer.
you can tell that the author put a lot of effort into this novel, although there are a couple of times where it may get confusing its enjoyable, atleast right now at chapter 3 lol
hope this story to much chapter anyway IIlike this story so far..
Hello, author here!Here to explain and answer any questions about the book. Feel free to ask, remember there are no stupid questions!-"Who is the main character?": There's actually one "main" guy which is Saahad, but there are other characters that the novel will be in the pov of for world-building and to move the plot forward.-"Will he be overpowered?": Well he'll be pretty damn strong even from the beginning, but he can still be beaten and there are other things that are stronger than him. So, not...really overpowered.-"Whats your update schedule": I actually began writing most of the chapters for this novel since June, but I was on vacation and could not upload them. I'll stick to one chapter a day to give me time to proofread and change up some plot points as I go along, since I have an idea of how the story will progress.-"Whats your inspiration": Heavy, I mean HEAVY Warhammer 40k influence for the world-building, of course its not going to be a complete copy and there definitely will be more differences than similarities. There's also a sprinkle of starcraft and Lord of Mysteries.Please review the novel-the good, the bad, and the ugly- if you have the time, they do help me as a writer. With that I hope you enjoy the novel. I know I did!
Good story. Captivated from the first few chapters.