hello people, author is here.I am not thick skinned enough to give myself the 5/5 rating. so leaving the rating stuff aside, let me talk about my story. As english is my native language you find grammatical errors here and there, please bear with this for sometime and I will correct them in the near future. now let me talk about the stability of the updates, up till now I have to admit that I didn't released the chapters consistently, but it will not be the same from now onwards and you expect more stability from myself. that is why i rate myself with 3 stars. when it comes to story development, character design and world building I have a clear idea and I do feel like I am doing a great job and if you feel like anything is out of place and please to comment under this review.if want any updates regarding the story please do comment here. I hope I get more reviews for the story, so that I can know it is reaching to many people.hope to see more reviews. signing of Great_demon_god
Very good book. Although the flow is slightly missing. Unlike other books there is no monotonous drain and thus the book is very captivating and interesting. We don’t have 10 chapters for one stupid thing.If you want a very quick and stable development with amazing new ideas.
This novel had a very good start, almost exciting. The system is novel and contains hidden dangers.So what went wrong?The entire build up is wasted!MC doesn't die (no surprise) and the story changes from a good novel, driven forward by the motivations and ideas of the MC, to a mediocre political drama in which the MC uses the system to cheat at every opportunity. It just isn't interesting to read about the MC cheating his way to fame and fortune. The world building breaks down at that point as well, what was once a nebulous empire with basic technology becomes a convoluted mess of different political systems with a very narrow technological development path.It becomes clear pretty quickly that the author has no clue about communication networks and how the basic building blocks of modern technology work.I could deal with a mediocre and very illogical world, if the plot or characters held my attention in any way, but they don't. The MC becomes 1 dimensional, he even uses a spell to deal with basic communication, the side-characters are stupid cliches and the systems good and evil mechanics become a source of constant frustration.
havent read this yet but i have a question, since they are gonna get married and have a daughter in the future, whats the point in his daughter telling him to contact and date her if its gonna happen eventually? what if they come together at an earlier time than that future, then that daughter wouldn't exist because of the timing. ?
So far so good. The world building and storyline seem to be progressing well with little to no grammatical errors — But I’d hate to be the MC, lol. That guy be down for a whole new world of pain.
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I really loved the start of the book. It's very creative and author did really good job with the world building. Now i don't know what else i should write but if you are new reader then please check it out.
I’m already deprived of this and keep checking on if it started being written again. ? Author, take your time, but can you tell us the estimated time it’ll take for you to continue producing chapters? It’s making me die with anticipation
Premise is nice. Quite similar to Great Doctor Ling Ran but the MC has been a doctor for 10 years, iirc, at this point. The fact that he has been a doctor for so long has basically no effect on the whole story, other than times where he quotes his "immense medical experience" when he needs to think of an excuse when using the system.Speaking of the system, it basically fades out into the background and becomes a glorified scanner and surgery streaming machine later into story. Even the streaming plot point is mostly to show the readers that the MC is, indeed, a master surgeon by making the stream viewers stare and awe at the MC's supreme godly skill. Plot progression is basically non-existent. 500 chapters in and only now is the MC starting to move up into a bigger stage. There is too much filler chapters that has mostly no impact on the overall story.The translation quality takes a dive around 300 chapters in. It starts to feel like its MTL as the pretty boy side character starts being referred to as a "she" and mob characters' titles start changing around all the time, becoming Director, CEO, President, Doctor, Teacher and such. At around page 500 it becomes basically unreadable.
Writing Quality is actually ok for me. But almost everything else is all wrong. Cheat is kinda weird. It says evolution but it says hidden evolution but still the standard lizard to snake to python to flood dragon to blah blah blah template. Classic sparrow bird template. And for his second beast he just had to get a cloud mist beast that publicly only has a Level three potential leading to another few rounds of underestimation and mocking from enemies and face slapping from the MC. No depth, No originality, nothing fascinating and no twist and turns. No tension, no charm, bland and lacks relativity and creativity. And the funny thing is that this book still had more than 16k Powerstone supporting it. Ain't that funny? way more than the leading book on the Powerstone rankings. And it's absolute garbage. World background is lacking. All experienced readers, prepare to lose some brain cells if you read this.Cliche lines, cliche plot, very predictable.My final evaluation, Author is terrible at writing with zero innovation. Unless of course this is just a trial read and the author isn't taking this seriously.