A very interesting read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.
Ten chapters in and I could say this is a masterpiece. The hook, plot, storyline and cliffhanger will all keep you wanting for more.Talk about the grammar, it is soothing and easy to read. Just hoping the author would release more chapters for us…
it was a good read soo far. imma add it to my library and stock up the chapters ??
ML forces/imposes himself onto FML. When they’re married, he breaks his promise of never hurting her and only being good to her, then he treats another woman well. When both women were in danger during an avalanche on a snow mountain, he saves the other. Afterwards, he forces FML to forgive him by threatening his own life. His pitiful state is his fault and his behavior is cheap. Disgusting. Thankful I didn’t pay money to get to those parts. Next!
A fantastic read! The balance between thrilling fights and heartfelt moments makes this webnovel a must-read for everyone.
So far I’m enjoying this book. There have been some minor issues with pronouns but otherwise it is really good . I can’t seem to put it down.I’ve always liked apocalyptic movies and now I guess I can add books to that list. This is one book that I know you can enjoy! If it goes on this way I may have to add another star?
Here we Go Go Go...!!!...!!!...!!!...!!!
It's a really good novel definitely recommend my only problem is the weekly updates I wish it were earlier but it's good nonetheless
This is some good shit bro. The author really cooked.
Who are Rose’s parents and it’s unfair for her family to treat her like that.
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I really like this MC—he's smart, and the game system is well-developed. I can't wait to see what other challenges he'll face in the future. Great job, author! Forgot to mention, 10/10!!!!!!!!