writing quality is good with good grammar and proper story writing. Good enough to keep readers retain the story.The story development is really good with how you wrote only the necessary details and kept readers engaged with the story. I like how the story is simple and you didn't info dump it. You are really an experienced and proper author.The character design needs some work. I mean how people hate him because he is just poor kid.And is Silvia a feminist. because readers assume things when you don't represent them. I know you want to make things suspensive but just bragging about beauty isn't how you should introduce characters.Other than that the story is very good. The updating stability is good.And world building is just good until now. As it completed in the future
