Wonder when he'll stop dropping books that don't make enough money. Author doesn't seem to have any passion for his books and will just drop, start a new series then drop that one too. Disappointing as I really liked Isekai Ascension ?
Ooh, is the story a returnee kind of people? I wonder if there is more in the situation?
The start is quite interesting hopefully the author continues
Hey , you know. good twillight fanfictions are very rare. And i really like the ghost riderxtl idea so please dont give up this story bro. I know its very hard in prime time. I hope you keep writing this story.... ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Damn this story is so interesting i cant believe i read all this in one flow. The update stability is kind of good and idk why by daverns characters is so funny ?
Wow... So cool!I love how your novel has some elements of bleach anime inside because I'm a big fan of that anime!Although there are some comma placement errors and so on, your story is very interesting!And, to be honest, I'm even starting to feel a little insecure now... Haha! XD
now Kai Has been through tough times and the way you put him out there is something I really emulate, something I think I'll try on one of my characters in the new book I'm working on. Over all it's a great book, five stars from me?
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
Has great potential, I wish the author luck in his work with God’s blessings. Review: going to be doing this in WebNovel structure so be lenient with me.Writing Quality:The writing quality is good, I have yet to notice any grammar mistakes or misplacement of words. The might be some, but it’s not something that would impact your reading flow. Update:The book updates often with the author having to take a break to deal with real life situations but who are we to judge. It could be better in my opinion but I would prefer quality over rushed work. Story development:The story itself is interesting, with an evil/rational mc who was placed in a world that’s seems to be primordial history with the usual Gods,dwarf,elves and etc but what makes this good is how the characters actually seems decently strong and realistic. Like at one point, a god notice the mc and went to kill him himself. But that’s to much spoilers so I won’t go into detail, so read it yourself and I tell you, won’t regret it. I do have to state that the MC plot cheat would be a dues ex-machine, meaning that a higher power would come in to save the day but this high power is also using the mc to develop himself. Character design: The author took inspiration from a lot of novels, some popular and well known while others not so much. I’ll be honest when I say the mc gives me the custom demon vibes with his thinking and decisions. Although, I do believe that some stuff could’ve been done better like his cautiousness, we can just chuck it up to his inner animalistic instincts. This is a non-human novel with the mc looking like the cover with every evolution (not sure if the author changed it in the future). I don’t expect any romance and I doubt the would be so don’t worry about it impacting the reading. World background: As I said before, the story seemed to be placed in a primordial historical world, with titans falling and rising to god hood, with Gods birthing their own creations. I have not read a lot of the novel with paying chapters coming in early, but from what I’ve read so far, the world seems to be big, with a lot of dimensions and domains of different God and stuff.
I love this series my only problem is the author takes to long to write a chapter
Your getting there keep pushing them out I’ll keep reading them!!! :)
Maybe too early to leave this review but I absolutely love the story just from the start, please write more stories like this I will definitely read!