unseenpickle
So..Here's an honest review............
I have read it till 680 chp.....
Its good and it really got better in middle chapters so dont leave early...
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If only its updated more but author just started one more new novel....
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If any author writes a single novel and keep his focus to on that novel only..it always ends up good novel.........I hope this one dont get down the hill ..i will really be sad...
Author if you have time why not update this one more....
I love all of this. It has a really good potential. Mc is good too. Keep it up author. You can do it . We will support you throughout your journey
I really like this story. I hope the romance won't be with an NPC (we're chads, not simps). The chapters are too short.
According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. To early to say, though.And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right.
writing quality is at the level of your average native English speaker so no complaints. especially since that's so hard to find in cultivation novels. the story is pretty good while it's not the most complicated it was almost always engaging to read.the characters are written at the level of a published book so better than most webnovels. (SPOILERS my only complaint really when it came to characters is that after the mc reaches stage one it felt like he became a new character which didn't feel as good to read about)there is about twelve consecutive hours worth of reading in this novel.the world background is the same cultivation world as in other novels but more well thought out.I'd say it's worth the time reading if evil MC's are your cup of tea.
This book has it all, the engaging plot, wonderful characterization and a writing style that manages to hold your interest and supply you with information without confusing you. Loved what I've read so far, going to my library for more reading later. Good job author. ?
It's a well-written novel with a lot of thought put into each chapters. The world setting was laid out perfectly. The only thing that's not sitting with me in my opinion is how the MC behaved. I like it when he started to get confident with himself after getting a power boost. Also his personal background was nicely explained. The aspect of growing and sympathizing with the character grows with us readers, however once he developed this new power, he rather becomes impulsive with his decisions and personality fluctuates a lot which left me frowning at times. I have enjoyed reading this novel otherwise and goodluck to future readers ?
One of the most frustrating read. Nonexistent character development for so many chapters then a sudden change. if you gonna do it like that do it in as few chapters as possible. Character development that takes many chapters must show gradual change. not an abrupt one.
I actually really like this novel.I first read it on an MTL website and since then I read the 2 new updates chapters on it every morning.The story is interesting and kinda for people who like fantasy wish-fullfillment. I would really appreciate it the translation speed could be improved
This one is Excellent, Great, Superb!!The Story is slightly similar to gamers of underworld but the MC is the one who play the game and direct the playthrough through the story instead of picking player from earth to be a guinea pig. I dont want to spoil the fun so you better read it yourself all I could say is this one is guud!!
A very interesting story, while slow, it’s extremely believable and interesting. The characters Feel alive and just how someone would react to getting Skills or Spells. Or fighting. So far a good read, and my favorite on the site!
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