I just finished this novel and I am a bit mixed on this book. I will list my thoughts on it. My biggest issue with this novel, which I am almost positive will be the biggest issue that causes people to drop this is the constant translation problems. The main one is constantly giving characters different pronouns almost every chapter. It’s confusing to keep up with if someone is a man or woman when they are first introduced or a minor character. Another one is they also tend to repeat a phrase/word in a sentence. An example for this is “He fought with the man, using his origin sword and origin sword together” Or “He is very handsome and handsome”. These problems really almost made me drop the novel and if this is a peeve for you then I don’t recommend you read this at all as it can be really frustrating. The story has a bit above average world building. It’s definitely better than most but doesn’t paint an amazing picture in my mind but overall isn’t an issue as it still gives the details and immersion needed to enjoy this. As far as the MC goes, I really enjoyed his personality. He is a clever, funny, and thoughtful person and can be serious/unserious at the right moments with good timing. There were probably only 3ish moments he irked me but i’d say he is written pretty well. The novel touches into romance for a bit which I personally enjoy to see as long as it isn’t a huge thing in the novel. But imo it is almost as if his wife and son are completely forgotten for a while, he leaves them and the novel simply mentions him visiting friends and family extremely vaguely. She was supposed to give birth to their son in 10 years but then a whole 40-60 years go by and there is still no update, and you only find out at the end of the book that he is yet to be born, I honestly wasn’t sure if I skimmed a sentence that mentions the birth while reading . Then it’s suddenly full blast in the last 3 chapters with a very slightly acceptable ending to their story. Regarding the ending, it was rather fast approached but still decently interesting to me. I wish it was more drawn out when it came to the final few enemy’s as it was hardly an arch. Especially when it came to the “final villain”. Overall I would lightly recommend this novel if you can overlook the frequent translation errors and issues i listed above. I ultimately give this book a rating of a solid 7/10, but if translations weren’t bad it would be an easy 8/10.
Fuck I finished reading this a while back and I reread the last chapter where sees yihi reincarnated. Fuck that gave me chills of sadness oof.
8/10
The concept of this story appeals to me so much it's scary. Lowkey forgot I was reading this at first but I came back to it lol. Rly jus waiting for mc to mature his body hehe.
Honestly, the story started good, it was a fun read, until around chapter 204. This chapter showed us that the MC is just an emotionless brick. Usually a story is formed through the interactions and connections the characters have between each other and how they grow through them. But this MC is the perfect ninja, no attachment, only training and killing montages. Tbh, a very bland MC.
My favourite author of all time. I can't wait to see what Lin Lin will be upto. This is exciting
My truthfully unbiased opinion: Peak Fiction
MC is just a beta male who thinks with his lower half. Indecisive . Aversive to killing .
A bit clunky but good but please dont include harem in tjis or it will become just cpmon trash after you mess up. Please keep it without harem
This book is way more awesome than it says.The world building is awesome taking you to a breath taking scene.The character development and the plot design all far exceed the mind.Even the writing style is good. Quite simple and easily flowing.Great work author and great world. Will carry it out!!
Giving this a 5 star because why not?Also, Philippines ??
Great Book!!! I have finally find a captivating novel to read after skimming through the countless novels on Webnovel... I have finished the current ten chapters the author have written so far, and with that I think I'm eligible to drop this review...If you are a reader that love fantasy novels with magic, action, relatable characters and a perfectly built world that will immerse you into the story... I urge you to try this Amazon novel out and you won't regret it...The world building, character design, writing style and how things are slowing been revealed is all just so interesting... But I'm an eagerly waiting to see how Alvan began an immortal and what the curse was all about