Author here! I saw some authors make the first review so here I am. I want to specify stuff about the story and mainly the first three chapters. The first chapter is very action paced while the second one is made to give contrast, a lot more chill. The second chapter was written in order to reveal some bits from the story. The third chapter had both information and action, with a bit more intense action in this one. I've used a VERY chill dark comedy with a VERY LITTLE description on blood and shit. However, if you have fear to blood and stuff, refrain from reading (again , I don't think it can be considered gore).In short, the first three chapters are made to try and make the reader hooked in the main dilemma of the book, whether Eizit would sacrifice his life for others, and more specifically repeatedly. It sets the background but doesn't explain much about it because it isn't relevant at this point, it doesn't matter where he is, or who is in danger.In the upcoming chapters, mainly 4 and 5, I'll use some ✨ exposition ✨ to reveal more about the world background and the plot. Thanks for reading! (I gave myself 5 stars cause I'm built like that, pls give the novel a try!)
Made it 16 chapters before decing to not continue Good story idea But yhe chapters Repeated the prior chapters story alot and the story jumped scenes too often and fidnt flow Also some holes in story plot made confusing
This book is an absolute must-read! From the first page, you're thrown into a world that's both familiar and terrifyingly new. The story masterfully blends intense action with quiet moments of character development, creating a rollercoaster of emotions. The characters are incredibly well-developed, and it's easy to become invested in their struggles, especially Elias, who is far from a typical hero.The plot is intricate and keeps you guessing at every turn. The introduction of the shards and the Ikonas adds a unique twist to the story, creating endless possibilities for the narrative. The world-building is exceptional, and the story hints at a much larger world with many characters with their own stories, suggesting the potential for more development.
It's a good one I gotta admit. Highly recommend.
It is very interesting can you please quickly release the remaining chapters
there's a system tag, but I ain't seen no system. but I'll keep reading to see since I have have like 39 chapters
Bro, this book is freaking awesome!!!! I can't get enough of it.never seen a book this good for a beginner...More chapters... please !!
Hello readers ( I know no one is going to give me a shit), Shameless author here : >! posting a 5 star review for increasing the rating of the novel..This lowkey author knows that Like me everyone hesitates before starting the novel, thinking if it is even the worth my time..Guys don't worry I can't say this novel will be peak as it is my first novel but I bet you will not feel your time being wasted..Here are some answer of your questions.( nobody has asked me )***Will the Mc be evil?**#Yes, the Mc will be evil, but he will be evil for a reason, he will do many evil actions but there will be reason behind all his evil actions#***Will be there any 'Romance' or 'Harem'?***#No there will not be any Harem in the whole novel### I am not sure about romance till now, but if there will be romance it will gonna be one sided##***What about the side characters?*******Spoilerr*****
This story’s got potential, like a tortoise taking its sweet time, which I love lol? But there’s too much filler, like stuffing a sandwich with air.??Still, the plot’s got me hooked, so keep it up! Just trim the filler, and we are good to go!Author be like:
review for FP...but DAMN the characters and the poster is on another level !!!! just for that , I might read this !!!
Felt that rage in Arnold, felt a bit fast, but still a stable start, keep up the good work
recommended for anyone looking to lose themselves in the story