story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.
Keep it up ,You have potential keep updating your story and this story will be the best someday
Currently at chapter 175. At least this novel understands that even though MC is OP, he understands that he needs allies and they also need to be strong. Supporting characters aren't just a means to an end like using them, then they're just in the background. Combat scenes aren't that detailed which sometimes make it longer, but this is good in my opinion. The author is also making use of time right where the MC and friends take a break and train. As for the pacing of the story, I think it's just right. The author is making the MC strong fast to catch up to the frontline where the pacing will slow down. Overall, it's a good novel.
Once again, I'm writing another story with a 'Fine, I'll do it myself' when I realised there aren't enough Sci-fi books out there with a mix of gene splicing, cybernetic enhancements, harem, some space opera and some spicy stuff sprinkled on top. Not going to lie, I was inspired by Cyberpunk and Starfield to write this so here I am. I have always been more into fantasy than Sci-fi so this would actually be my first attempt at writing a Sci-fi story and I'm still learning about this new genre so any guidance would be appreciated.
This is simply a little message that I wanted to send to you guys.I've made the decision to make a few alterations ever since the protagonist changed into a girl during the "Castlemania" arc, at the end.The protagonist was originally planned to remain a girl for around three arcs, which would have required 150 chapters, subtracting about 50 from "Castlemania" (100 chapters left).Because the protagonist was originally going to be a female (one-time thing) due to the events of "Castlemania," I chose to return his gender in order to advance the plot.I'd like to let you know that after the "Castlemania" storyline is complete, the protagonist will once more be a guy.
Never! Never!
"Alright, my work is finished, now only one is missing. Yes! A name."
"Its makes sense," said Mamat.
Jimin:"yeah babe...what is it??"
After some time, a doctor came and treated my wound. He removed the handkerchief and put a bandage on my forehead.
Marvin sendiri yang naik pangkat kepada [Pemerintah Malam] juga menerima tiga keistimewaan legenda: [Element Immunity], [Negate Death] dan [Barrier Breaker]. Tiga keistimewaan major ini menyebabkan Pemerintah Malam menjadi kelas yang paling digeruni bagi ahli sihir.
Crying is of no use