.... I can't bring myself to keep reading only got up to the end of ch 9 but this says it all for me a godly wasted talent and a cookie cutter swordsman
raw please?...............................
i seemed to have read the first few chapters in another work. ignoring the originality of the premise, this one seems to develope better and with better writing style as well.
i dont know if i want to read this book. 13 chapters in and you get to basic premise of the novel. basically he is trapped on a stone pillar by unknown entity. if he wants to live he will need to gather 1000 points while "acting" in movies. so i guess it will be something similar to terror infinity? cause of rather long intro i suspect that this will have lots of wordpadding, so i will not continue reading this.
Firstly, the writing quality is above average, the humour being a nice touch.Secondly, The story developent is amazing, alrhough background and description of the surrounding area as well as shock factor from transmigration can be improved.Since my second point comes close to the subject of world building, I will address the world background. Although the qi and spiritual points were addressed, I feel like explanations on the jobs of shaman can be addressed too. Additional information on different qi levels could be addresed so as to know the setting (ie. cultivation world) better. Elaborating on the positions in the sect which XY’s father is the head of would be great too. Different creatures and the grading of items can also be elaborated on.Since world background also touches o character design, this webnovel is quite good at that. Although, as with any other webnovel, there are some slight problems in understanding the charaxter of XY’s siblings and who is eldest, et cetera.Lastly, UPDATING STABILITY. If you came for chapters, mass releases and similar, you will be disappointed. This book has not updated in 5 months (at this time) and most likely will not update for a long time. I pray that the author will release more chapters soon.AHHHH, who the hell am I kidding. I am doing this on my phone a week after GRADUATING EXAMS. I AM BEGGING RHE AUTHOR, PLEASE UPDATE FOR MY SANITY, THIS BOOK IS *GNIQUF* AMAZING SO....dlrow siht quF
Nice one indeed... From the modern era.. women are intellectually crazy ??? Thank you, author, for this one of a kind story. A mixture of different culture and ideas.