I wanted to give this a poor review, but it's definitely at least a three star novel. If you don't mind plenty of English errors, though not the most I've ever seen, and the author having no idea how to write dialogue, then it's decent. The characters don't have much depth, it's obviously a wish fulfillment novel, and there's sort of a weak to strong vibe. In a way.The story itself has its unique points and a bit of potential, but I really can't enjoy it. Honestly, the poor writing makes it distasteful, so I automatically feel like every character is less intelligent because their dialogue is grammatically incorrect. Author obviously isn't using spellcheck despite it being free in multiple programs.The author has dreams, and the courage to act on them, but not the care to see that everything is written properly. I mean, he hasn't even Googled how to write dialogue, or learned by example from literally any book that isn't a play. Don't understand how that's possible, but, I'd be willing to revisit this review if some improvement was made.
The grammar used has very few faults, and it is well-written. The plotline seems amazing, and I hope you can keep up with the good work!???
This is my own work so I will of course be biased and give it 5 out of 5 stars. Also I've never written anything like this before, so for the time being I'm just having fun with it. I hope you can enjoy it and please leave insights if you can.
If it wasn't for the boring and stereotypical character design, this could be one of the better novels on this platform. Most characters are one dimensional and made to hate/like them. Nice/intelligent people are beautiful while the bad/hideous/dumb guys are fat. This huge flaw drags the whole novel down. It's quite a disservice to the interesting and thought through start that this novel had.I hope that the author will pu more effort into his/her characters because this series clearly has potential.
Read the first chapters and i am intrigued- the writer did an excellent job to get a reader hooked right into the story. The plot caught my eye and I am curious about the main characters. I think this was a great read!
Just adding a review so I can finish a "quest" have a nice day and enjoy reading your web novels so.... good bye and stay safe from the virus :P
Reading status: 40 Chapters. Five star rating.A very fun read. I like the story and it's world an hope it will be chosen soon. Can't wait to read new chapters.
Sounds good!! Can only hope this one would be done right... I've been disappointed by most chat group novels.
One of the best novels I've read here. I'm not a big fan of video games genre novels but this one really caught my attention from the very begging. Perfect grammar, pacing, plot, and a lot more. Keep it up Gala! Surely you'll reach T25 soon :D
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Author enough with the racist sh*t....it's pissing me of...it's really so pointless....honestly I prefer Japanese peeps to Chinese peeps after the recent chapters....Chinese people are like monsters in the book....the Japanese accepted your welcomes with warm hearts but you just ended up tricking and backstabbing them
Great book, I love it, esspecially about MMORPG, i'm ex gamer,