Thestory is full of holes. And there is no chaptet to do world building. The names of the places turn into chinese and somehow the magical world becomes chinese. Somehow huaxis also exists and the names of peoole might start in english but i have the feeling that it like western names in a western starting world turning slowly into ancient china. Its makes you confused without reason.Its making my head hurt. I will read something else especially because the fun parts are skipped all the time
I just loved fatedevilace books, and this is really good as well.
Another rebirth story but boi how good that one chapter is. A must read.
I am writing this after reading up to chapter 16.The story is interesting and has some new concepts. The plot progression is slow but only up to the point when the author is explaining about the System and the status window. I have read many System novels but only a small number of them actually details about the Status Screens. This novel is one of them!Then there is the world building. Honestly, the number of chapters is still less to tell exactly how good the world building is but from they way the author described the village, I can tell they would do a good job in this field.There are many good things about the novel like daily updates, good writing quality and a nice description of everything. But let's also talk about some drawbacks. One could say that the story is moving very slowly but I am a LOTM reader so I like the pace. The one thing you should work on is to give some ups and downs to the story to make it more interesting.Although I say that, keep doing what you're doing as I can see it improving as the new chapters come in. I like the novel and will continue reading it?. I hope it keeps on getting better and better...
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
I really like the concept of this, a yandere girl meets psychopathic guy and how the two tropes collide with each other. The only thing that irks me is the bad grammar and very weird writing. The pacing is all over the pace, and needs to be more consistent. Overall good though.
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Cool book cover bro. like the novel, keep up the good job.
This is the name of the fan page recently created for this book, Vengeance Through Passion. Let's help the author of this book boost the views on this platform. I'll be posting pictures and other photos in relation to the magnificent and detailed descriptions of this book.One thing I love about this book and our author is the way everything just comes together. I love this book and i know you will. It's a slow burn so make a final judgement only after chapter thirty. Follow our author on Facebook @Angel writes and also the playlist for the book is crazy. There's a very very slim chance you might not like the book but you would love the playlist with over seven listening hours. One more thing. I love love Freya and *Richard* PS. They aren't the main characters. The MC's are way better.
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
Girl: *sacrifices her self and ushers in a new era of peace*God: “DO YOU WANT A DICK?!”