The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
One of the best master and disciple book I have read. This is for people who like an op mi c
The important thing is that the character is evil and dark, but we must pay attention to the many interpretations of the dialogues, as well as not to make all characters stupid, provocative and naive, the human being is the son of his environment, if the human place of living is harsh and dark, cruel and dark characters will be produced. Good luck, you don't need slapping dialogues in the face, they're boring
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This is amazing would recommend to anyone looking for a magical world full of over powered, under powered, big brain smol moment scenes. Im sitting here read up to 32 waiting for more and the sad moment it reqiures fast passes.
I have really liked the way how author has taken time to slowly build relationship between characters ,cultivation background and give us a brief overview of the world. I see high potential just hope it follows something like espionage or military conquest and not just cultivation.
Man this is some good stuff. The feels in the writing is spectacular, it will definitely pull you in. The storyline, the plot and characters all well written. Keep it up man.
There should be more Hollywood novels............................................. ...........................................
Enlo Mina. Jungie doesn’t know where to start. From the first chapters alone, different emotions filled the pages—and they colored ML’s personality enough to make us know him by heart. We love him already heheheheh. The Great Mo, his foul mouth and his quirks hehehehe. For the writing quality... of course it was perfect heheheheh. How can Jungie ever worthy. Cherly-san writes clearly and you’ll know what I’m talking about from the first read. Jungie will look forward to more chapters, adventures, and the crispiest curse words hehehehehehe!READ THIS MINAAAA!
Hi, shameless author passing by, I know the title is wrong spelling. I already updated it, but nothing happens. So I don't really know, and the cover is a bit messy, sorry for that I'm not an expert.... I hope you like my novel.