[Review after reading 11 chapters]This actually isn't too bad in its own genre.The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique.The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual.And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information.Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read.!SPOILERS!This is, to me, the weirdest thing.This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why?Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena.So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be.Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt?And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety.You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.
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Thank you so much for the support everyone! Just a heads up, if you don't feel like vibing with this novel, please read up to chapter 13, I got a little surprise for you there hehhe~ >///<
can't really bring myself to like it. first chapter writing quality was nice, but later on everything became too rushed. actions that mc took didnt have any reason behind them. i mean in first few chapters mc suddenly gets himself a girl, learns magic, is talent poached by king and so on. premise by itself is really interesting, but story isnt living up to it. :(
I love this novel. It's an interesting story with excellent storytelling. It has the making of a story that simply yearns to satisfy your desire. It's a fun apocalypse novel with some game elements added in to make it funnier. You won't find any of that cringe about protagonists and their personality, never questioning what the MC does, he just does it. He doesn't have to explain the scientific knowledge about his actions, and if you have any questions, the author answers them in the comments. It's fun and tells the story of a guy being himself. He's just himself, not some cold guy who kills everyone for the lady kind of random cringe with lots of dark thoughts. There is not any filler like in other novels, when there an enemy we don't have to bore through several texts of how some guy fights his zombies. We get to see the outcome. Fun! Keep it succinct!
It is definitely a notch above the stories |have read here till now.I picked this up because it had someappealing tags & nice reviews, but gosh, the harem stuff is very overbearing. Wouldn't mind being introduced to some male friend of Jason's and having some sort of normal or serious conversation, instead of him being surrounded by gals every chapter. You know, might flesh him out beyond the Casanova that he is.As of chapter 8, the plot has progressedrather slowly – with only one tease of thesignificant samsara aspect. This progression is mostly drowned in the banter & frills the male lead indulges with his harem group.Will continue reading since it's somewhatentertaining to read.
This is so Good why is Author not uploading a chapter we are desperately wating for a new chapter and Author you need ti uplaod chapters as then your book will reach to a good and beautiful destination as this book is so good and please upload chapters dear Author.
Wonderful writing. Very well put together. I love the characters and how the story builds around them. I can tell you put some good thought into your writing.. Well done my friend.
Have you ever had watered down beer before? If you have then you have an idea what I'm the King Of Technology has done to Release That Witch. It is better than water but that's about it. In RTW the MC starts an industrial revolution with the help of witches which allows him to skip the proses of making tools to make tools that he needs to make tools to make a half descent steam engine. In I'm the King Of Technology his only real cheat is knowing how to build something and yet he some how gets untrained people to build an oil industry and gas/diesel (not sure which) trucks before he even sets up a steel industry. If some one took some British peasants from the past and gave them the best education on oil refinement they could in two months or even a year, and then set them up with the simplest oil refinery they could. I know I would not bet on the oil refinery lasting a year. Over all I will not be waiting on bated breath for the next chapter, but when there's nothing to read I might come back to it because after all watered down beer is better than water (some times).