Mc is smart and thinks way ahead, that pacing is really good and the mc is evil but not so evil that he would throw someone close to him way he does still value people. There’s more that is good but it worth a read and it’s great to see the mc bully and gaslight protagonist.
The story shows a lot of promise. The world background and characters are reminiscent of the Dragon Ball franchise. Keep on writing more chapters.
I fucking love it release more pleaseee
So good. Can't wait to see more from the author. There should be an Anime adaption make it happen Webnovel!!!
Congrats for winning prize in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)
Claude the cultivator............ could mkae a jp name but too lazy to make a cn name eh? Not hard to pluck a name off this site but you dont bother
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The prologue took my ducking breath away! Seems like writing in present does have its perks, as it really gave the feeling of 'urgency' writing in past tense doesn't have. As for the idea, isn't it conpletely fresh? Don't you guys want to see where this is going to go? So anyway, thumbs up to the author. I hope you continue writing this novel.
~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~Good things~Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system.Bad things~Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.
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Another Sign-in novel .. There are so many of them .. But most I like is my girlfriend from turquoise pond one..it hellva good novel........
amazing one, light enough to be funny and deep enough to immerse.
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