Sordahon
Current chapter-4I guess this is the first review because this is an entirely new novel, somewhere buried under other hundreds of thousands web novels but I believe that this will not be the case because I can see a lot of potential in this novel if done correctly!-----------------------------------------------------------------------Thought the writing is very good---Excellent, the story development and world background is not clear. But what can I expect from a novel with only 4 chapters.In first chapter I was hooked with the story, and so for other chapters.The concept of character integration seems promising but the trope of transmigrating to main character's body from a story, who couldn't concur the world and the MC is challenged to concur the world is cliche. To say it--I have read it in a Po**hwa.??? Stuck in academy's eroge or something.Though, it wuld be best if you could keep consistency.???
I'm angry at myself for having read the whole thing, now I don't know what to do, I can't wait to find out more, the story is intriguing ! Can't wait for the new chapters !
Ok, Rhett is the overall MC. The storyline has been great so far, except for minor typos. I like the idea of killing the ice dragon and becoming the king of the dragon slayers. Those dragon slayers living in a trash can was really funny. Good writing author
This novel captivated my heart.Iam expecting more twist in the story...love it...
Good Luck with the story. hope it does good
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Like every author, i am gonna rate my novel 5 stars. I want to give a message to all the readers (well not like i currently have any) that this novel is not about someone who is possessed by a devil or who a devil inside them from the birth. This novel is about a devil itself. The struggle and how a devils live his life in hell. This novel will make you question that the perception we have draw about the devils in our mind, is it really true? This novel will make you connect with different mythologies, you all will want to think about the mysteries. As an author, i want to create a novel which rivals the most greatest manga and anime of all time, One Piece. Doesn't mater even if my novel doesn't look good to all of you in the first volume but i promise you all, the more you will read, the more you will get into it.
I am quite confident about the evolution of this novel, it is not the best but it can be different. It is quite refreshing and I hope that the author will stay the course and continue to write
Thank you to everyone who took the time to read my book! Any feedback, questions, or even suggestions are more than welcome. This author will continue to do their best!
loved it and loving it. I really really hope you keep making more chapters
I think I dont to say anything right?!Just give us more nice stories!!!!
looking forward to it!!.................
