FranzenOrosco
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So far this novel has a great story, the MC mainly is very well balanced, intelligent and slightly cold, but not an emotionless cunning bastard, the secondary characters have reasons to act as they do and not only because they are good or bad, many clichés they are avoided, especially the irritants and the gifts are well placed in the context and so they are not irritating, if I were to add something it would be the MC to have the perfect muscle just to disappear with the fragile appearance, and a different type of weapon for him to specialize, like a war hammer or halberd that match his rough style (which he also calls for muscle)
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Whoa. That escalated quickly. I knew something big was gonna happen but I was really surprised how the events had turned out. I wanna comment your writing skills. Your grammar is on point and your sentence construction is absolutely up to par. Really good writing.
