FranzenOrosco
Greetings everyone!This is a word for the authors. I've consolidated chapters 2 through 14 into 4 chapters. The content remains unchanged (and a few spelling mistakes rectified) only the number of chapters has been reduced.
Review after thoroughly reading the first four chapters btw won't spoil anything so don't worry :) (not memeing or anything gonna be real)first: lucan is going to make river of blood flow (obv the blood will be of his enemies)second: potential lover is a beauty unlike none has seen before (everyone's little brother whistles)third: the setting is insane (just like all the other mlb novels :D)fourth: from the name I can just guess that hero's are in for it (hopefully crazy killing happens lol) well that's it go vote
For anyone who wishes to read this novel, IT IS NOT IN ENGLISH. I'm not sure why the synopsis is but the book itself is not. I hope the author can translate this to English or find someone who can help them do this
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this quite cool you know that? keep up author for the good work. i'll continue reading as i felt it is important to leave a review. i can't even
I am shamelessly reviewing my own novel (shortly). It's my first work, so don't expect much. I try to develop the MC's character and provide this story with some eastern vibes. Give is a try!
Love it, personality of characters, development, originality, concept, ALL FULL MARKS! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've read plenty of system comics and novels, few catch my eye, this one has held my attention well due to the fact that he isn't asking the system how to do everything amd is constantly getting insane op glow ups from the system...well atleast not too many to male the story go bad, the author played our the glow ups very well making them seem more natural overral instead of them just being dropped out of nowhere, so overral Love the novel, would love just a tad bit more detail into the world background ofher than that i dont see much to say anything about, great story have an amazing day/night author and keep up the amazing work, hope everything goes well with the novel!!
I've only read to chapter 32 but its great nice ideas.......................... ............................................................
I have no idea why people are leaving reviews with 1 star and saying this novel is bad with reasons that don't even happen. This is an amazing novel and you should read it before you decide. don't trust these reviews.
Love the way this story unfolds.. Seems like there is s new plot coming up after knowing Mr.Alexander was involved. Who is the person behind all these? A new one or one of the people we had read before...
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