ShivamThakur1883
I agree with you. While o understand jealousy, adult Blake was a bit too yandere-ish
The story is interesting and if it weren’t for the simplistic female characters I’d keep reading. Why are they behaving more like a litter of jealous puppies than individual humans? It’s pretty common in this platform, but is it necessary? I do really like the story - very interesting considering the genre!
imagine everyone being doted on like this novels protagonist •~•
true true. it's a story full of plot armor, dumb face master slapping and really bad female writing. i was like, "author you do know that you and majority of your readers are female right? ?" the entire time lol
it's basically like an average cultivation novel but bl
Ah, I read the MTL versions, and no they are not on this website. The translation is about 2-3/10 and requires proper work to make it as readable and enjoyable as Ultimate Evolution. There are many Chinese idioms and ways of speaking that don't translate well into English and the usual grammar structure is different too.
I think ive watch the Anime Version of these... The plot is really familiar..
it is my beginners novel years ago maybe 5-6 years i still remember its is my best novel i read this 3 times. after so many years accidently cross this novel again now this novel feel hilarious... but still special spot in my journey of reading novels. good for beginners no worry for plot holes, cringe Ness. just feeling nostalgic .
So, was it?
one of the best kindom building novel. it's fun read and fast paced too. only annoying thing is it's stuck at 99.6% read completion
I enjoyed it but it also has some tiresome elements.
Sometimes the motivations of the characters fall a bit flat or are inconsistent, sometimes the 'game elements' that are how the characters grow just get ignored for no reason (the MC will just refuse to check for upgrades for a few hundred chapters).
For me it started off outstanding and then tapered off to mid, but that's still better than most novels out there.
Enjoyed,It has a good flow and character progression really enjoyed reading all of the story can recommend 8/10
I really want to know the real purpose of writing it. I mean her actions doesn’t even make sense. More I read, more I find her unbearable. All the disguise and things she did in a minute, is it even possible ? Why didn’t she show proofs of her being a mother to Ye in the starting only. Who leaves their 5 year old with someone else all the time. Please think twice before writing her character.
