This is basically a continuation of the translation from where the last translator left off. Please don't expect regular uploads as I will do so when I have the time and mood to do so.
i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go :- as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel .- nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm.- Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree .i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment ??
eu achei a história muito interessante queria que ela continuasse
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the synopsis is so misplaced lol? it's just a guy who transmigrated with a system that gives him fixed exp everyday that's why it's called "idle immortal" what mirage are you even talking about????but the start is good tho I'm just here to make fun of the synopsis ?
This is indeed a dark romance. I feel sadness and anxiety towards Renee. I hope everything will be fine with her. There are a lot of chapters ahead and this gives me hope that everything will be all right. And if talking about style and grammar, then I can tell that this novel is really well written. Characters and their personalities are also well developed. In general, this story is worth of attention.
he named it after a dying star and believed the world was born cause of it's deaththe thing is he was dying and he built it................
I personally enjoy the character and his ideology of "heroes" and "villains". I also like his style and his trait of not being seen until speaking. I love this idea and the way the clan is set up as of now is quite good. I however don't like the idea of being able to edit the world. I think this is incredibly overpowered even if it's something as simple as having your name somewhat known but given a boost in cultivation adsorption from blood. And the editing world was only green. What would happen if this edit was orange or purple. The effects would be unimaginable. Never the less I love this style of story and hope you continue with this incredibly enjoyable ride.~Thanks for reading this~
This novel was one my regret. Thanx????? This novel was one my regret. Thanx????? This novel was one my regret. Thanx????? This novel was one my regret. Thanx????? This novel was one my regret. Thanx?????
First time reading this type of book. A very refreshing start although it was a bit too fast. Love how the mc interact with the system and the fighting scene was well made.
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i have read the whole i initial chapters, and believe me when I say I couldn't stop reading it. It was a very interesting concept of story! The right mix of fiction and action in one book! it was amazing. Good job, Author!