Staplehead
his reward for becoming the king of his country has not been given
Good so far.:) ;) "_" :_: ;_;
It's just the first chapter and I'm already enjoying it
Here's my review as promised. I like the subtle change many stories started with op main character hiding his abilities because of this or that. I like how this MC flaunts it, very cool! Looking forward to more non human women to join his harem!
This was a fresh breath of air......
I dont write reviews for books. I've read plenty of the greats from shadow slave, kill the sun, the mech touch, the legendary mechanic, lord of mysteries, etc. but I've never written a review. that being said, this is underrated as fuck. maybe not yet quite to the level of shadow slave or lord of mysteries, but it's definitely getting there. one of the biggest points i enjoy is the subversion of expectations, i dont know how else to put it, but it's always enjoyable. It's also never hamfisted or forced by coincidental plot armor, It feels authentic and takes itself seriously.
This is not your typical story. The beginning will confuse you, but more and more will be explained the further you read on. This book is neither a meme story or something with no depth, so don't expect that based off the first chapter's title.There will be romance later on, but won't develop immediately. It will be slow-burn in my opinion, and the same could be said about Harem. It will happen, but it will be one at a time, and across hundreds of chapters. By chapter 500, there might be 3, maybe 4 harem members, and all will be fleshed out. You will either love them or you will hate them, but I firmly believe you will love them more than you hate them. After all, they will appear very likeable as long as you are cultured.The universe in this story is connected to my other books, including Evolution, so be prepared for something utterly massive and mind-blowing. Moreover, I will include tons of depth in this book, hoping to improve on what I was lacking in Evolution. Romance will be improved, harem done right, power systems off the charts, and tons of action, exploring, etc...Feel free to use this review as a forum channel. I will answer any questions that haven't already been delved into.
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
Enjoying this one immensely! Keep up the good work author :)
i like what u did with the top fans ;) Very innovative
"What? I don't know what are you talking about magician." Doctor Jack staring at me with his creepy face.
"General Nicolás it's nice to see you without your gear" June greets cheerfully. Nicolás gives a nod in agreement and gets up.
