good book will definitely continue to read this book..can be recommended to friends
Interesting so far. There is a lot going on within the first couple of chapters. It will be interesting to see where the story goes next.
Oooouuuu yesss love me a good alpha novel. Really liking this novel. It’s pretty good give it a read ❤️
Well above average Bleach fic. My main issue is that even for a fic, the growth of certain supporting characters power is a bridge too far, putting them on par with Captains. Otherwise, the writing is good, even though it uses that weird 'Name: Talks' format that for some reason dominates here. With text to speech, it's an annoyance just below infinite dashes? Pace felt slow but that might be me wishing the retelling of canon parts would go by faster, though I admit it's probably useful for those unfamiliar with the source material due to passing time or never having watched/read it. No idea on updates at this point as I'm way behind.
Good story line start reading it today anf progress is good
Yang Liu is so funny, I already want to see more of her and Han Chen's story! I love this kind of story, I never get tired of it, post more haha
Nice story, I like the pacing and the first chapter really seems very exciting. I like the character design though you could be more assertive on the use of some metaphors so that it makes the story more grand and have a gravitas. Thought the characters look really legendary. The development is good. Just be regular at updating, and you'll be good to go.
Love the story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
"He won't care and just smiling hearing the ridicoulus human talking that thing they were smart, but what they know is an illusion that can be true or false.
"Yes, shit ...." We answer in unison.
Kenji immediately raised his hand. "Oh! Oh! I know that."
Never! Never! Never!