i normally see novels and dramas about a rich CEO and a poor girl , but i think this novel is a lot doifferent, like the poor girl is something else , let's see ...
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I like the concept and world building of your story. You explain it in detail. I also like how the setting of your story, I remember the anime Ajin. But I have some inputs, namely you can tidy up your writing paragraphs, and also maybe you can use the symbol (") for dialogues, not using (-) because it is very rarely used in novels.
slow update still learning about the world with the mc
Hello Guys!!TurtleMaster here.I am a huge fan of light novels, manga and anime. This novel is a first time writing work for me. So, I tried my best in creating a vast and cultural world filled with real-life inspirations(can be found if searched properly).Please Support Me by leaving a comment on your honest opinion as it will help me greatly in improving myself.Thanking You Once Again,TurtleMaster_______Forgive me for Rating my own Novel XD.The 5 star rating signifies my commitment to do my best for this novel.
i'm not the best at writing reviews but i think this needs one because don't understand why this isn't more popular..the romance is a slow burn but that's kinda the point, the mc Love has crazy character development with how she works through her emotions and the pay off is amazing the further in you go through the second volume the better and better this getsi'm completely invested in everything now story characters everythinghas an amazing mix of violence, romance, funny parts and even if you feel like the first volume is slow it really isn't because everything gets tied back and becomes important in the later chapters, crazy good foreshadowing and story telling all roundgive this a chance and stick with iti have no regrets. ???????
Chaos right from the start as the apocalypse is happening. Can’t stand main characters teachers and class. They deserve to perish! Great start to the novel
Achei bem interromper a premissa, quero ver mais sobre o passado do pai dele, e as habilidades escolhidas para ele é muito boa e n é muito apelona
I’m loving this so far it’s been a refreshing take on cultivation style novel and characters are well done so far. Keep up the great work can’t wait to see more of your take on this!!!
Desolate Fate is a re-write of another novel called A Desolate Life. I'm basing my review on ADL, which I read all 256 chapters of.This is a better written xianxia then most of what is available on webnovel and other sties like royal road. It avoids the bad tropes and cliches common in other cookie cutter stories, yet still stays true to the genre. The world building and cultivation system are consistent, and you can tell the author has done a lot of work behind the scenes to make everything feel purposeful.The story takes follows the protagonist's rise in the cultivation world, as well as his exploration of his mysterious past. Each volume is a satisfying story arc in and of themselves, while all still progressing the meta plot. The first few chapters contain foreshadowing for a reveal that comes 250 chapters later, while not feeling out of place.The main character definitely grows and changes throughout the chapters. The main character starts out as young child, forced into a "righteous" sect that has killed his family. He struggles with his anger, and the conflict of wanting to get revenge while not going too far. His innocence is broken and for a while he becomes a lot more demonic, which can turn away some readers. The villainous lead tag is there for a reason. In his heart of hearts though, the MC does not want to be a killer, or evil. He is forced by his circumstances for a while, but eventually works towards gaining redemption.
The Monster throw me away to the man. "This, do whatever you want. Where is the money?"
"What is that? " said V while holding JM hands.