It's nice...Very nice
Intriguing read
Hello everyone... This is the author. The story is about a werewolf girl who tried to be a peacemaker between werewolves and humans. In the process of doing that, she will get torn between two men- one is a hunter and the other one is a werewolf.
77 chapters 2-19-24
is this book completed?
same as the first book, knocking back my rating due to the author's inability to keep his own characters straight, re-proofread your story's bro, get the names of your characters sorted out, but other than that good read, but felt the ending was rather rushed...
very nice story
Amazing book!
keep up the good work! lovin'it
Any updates?
Happy New Month Guys!!
This is romance which is part of a series but can also be read as a standalone. For those who love completing series check out Redemption's Sweet Temptation too.
Feel free to drop your comments here(this page) because I won't be able to read those in the chapters.
Clichés, though often derided, can actually provide engaging storytelling if executed skillfully, as seen in series like Toradora! and High School DxD. However, the book in question falls short in implementing this concept. Here are the key issues:
1. The protagonist is a major issue. While anti-heroes can be compelling, the main character here comes across as an edgelord, whose actions lack depth and genuine thought. A well-written anti-hero, like in Dungeon Defense, would have been more effective.
2. The harem dynamic feels forced and unconvincing. It's unclear why everyone is attracted to the protagonist – his charm is practically non-existent, akin to a prickly sea urchin. Yue's affection might be justified due to saving her, but the other women's interest seems to stem from lack of alternatives rather than genuine connection. A single heroine, like Yue, might have made the story stronger, as the conflicting values between the harem members and the edgelord MC create tension.
3. The protagonist's overpowered abilities contribute to the problem. While it's possible to balance strength and tension, as demonstrated in Mushoku Tensei, this book fails to achieve that balance. Every battle is one-sided, lacking excitement and leaving readers unsatisfied. What should be the high point of action turns into a bland and anticlimactic sequence.
In conclusion, the book has a promising concept, but the execution is lacking coherence and fails to create a compelling narrative. The author could have benefited from refining the main character, deepening the relationships, and providing more substantial challenges for their protagonist's growth.
So far, it's a delightful and laid-back tale with a touch of cuteness, quite intriguing. I'm looking forward to seeing where the narrative takes off as it progresses.
his other novel got a chapter 9 hr ago ?