It's a great story. It should definitely be read. The characters are great, especially Reagon. Even though it has some minor mistakes, this novel is definitely a peak fiction.
I hope our favorite author, @witchy8181, is doing well. I’m missing my daily dose of reading.
A really great novel with immense potential. I am definitely looking forward to keep reading. A must have in the library. Looking forward to future chapters! Thanks for the hardwork author.
The emotional core of the story is palpable. I'm already feeling connected to the characters. Very good read!
I’m going to be honest I only read the first 14 chapters. But so far there’s seems to be a lot things that don’t make sense. First off, the talismans book cost 500 points,which makes sense but then he takes only a month to learn how to….write???? You telling me no one else can do such a simple thing. There’s zero down cost like??? No theory learning, using mana or “nux” to write/infuse, etc. Meaning a 3 year old child could make one. Next him having above average compresión is fine, but he can just see 2 people and already tell who is stronger? Even if they had a severe injury before???knows how to perfectly fight even though it seemed he had barely any fighting experience? I scrolled past the chapters and seemed like it would continue. So I can’t give this story more than a 2.
"No, now what you should do is go to the far place from this country. Don't ever, ever come back here because these creatures are very strong in this country. So you have to leave and don't come back."
"Yes my Lord," answered Lilith while seeing Light sleep soundly.
"Huh! Aku kalah dalam ronde ini, tetapi itu tidak berarti aku akan kalah dari ronde lain." Sambil berseru dingin, dia menatap Vaun dengan amarah di matanya.
"Hello" that familiar voice make me very shocked i think thats Hoshi or just a friend?!
Once arriving, she scanned the French-cuisine restaurant to look for the dashing CEO. It was easy to find him in his well-tailored suit and sleek hair. She strutted towards him, unaware of the other people looking her way. Adeline knew she was recognizable but not with the rich. A chair was pre-pulled for her, ready to be sat on. She greeted him in a proper manner, curtsying his way. His eyes shot up and was amazed at what was in front of him. Whilst he was occupied looking at the Goddess in front of him, Adeline was ordering some expensive alcoholic beverages.
Only shooting stars
The spatial choreography in these chapters is honestly fascinating. Everything happens around doors and windows and partitions—Su Tanghuan frozen mid-step, the neighboring room where Ji Yan hides to listen, the closed doors she glances at when she thinks she's alone. The author really uses architecture as a kind of emotional barometer. When Su Tanghuan enters Zheng Fu's space, the text describes her 'assuming an imposing air' and the Ji Residence maids 'swarming forward' to drive the Zheng servants aside like quails. There's this whole visual of power shifting through physical space. And the scene where she leans in to whisper threats to Zheng Butler—'in a low voice only the two of them could hear'—that intimacy of a secret shared in a doorway, with the whole house potentially listening... it's so cinematic. I could literally see this as a drama. The farmstead thirty li from the capital, the villa, the main residence—all these spaces matter because they're where identities can be performed differently.