Actually very interesting plot , same with characters but make it unique more use different methods to elevate your imagination and let it take you to heightsss.Not a very good story but a readable if you have time
Speed down the pace of your story a bit, and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!
Good, very good. I'm want continuation,......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Love it!The writing quality is top-notch.The story development is neither too slow nor too fast and has a lot of potential, which is in the right hands to bloom.The MC is goal-oriented and not interested in romance or any other distractions—only the path to power.Update stability has never been a factor to question, with daily updates ?.The world-building is also done marvelously.
When Nong Anmin left, Naruto opened his mouth and looked at Goku in shock.Just blow it away like that?!!Having never seen this kind of operation before, he felt like his brain was freezing.
this novel is a masterpiece, plots are excellently woven and the twists are superb, completely hooked!
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The older Gonan sat on a rock nearby the teenager, holding her soda in both of her hands, both of which trembling, making the liquid in the can ripple like crazy. Determined to figure out what was going on, he stepped towards the girl and spoke up.
[User you are doing very well in your mission. I came to inform you that Luciana is plotting something from what I have seen. When you told me to monitor her I thought it was unnecessary but I saw her writing up a plan. Which is seducing Prince Lance in the upcoming ball that's all I could see as I couldn't see the whole plan. There was also some writing poisoning the emperor I only saw it briefly as she burned after she wrote it. In her planner she only put some words like in the ball date there is SL and PE]
"This is a bit hard to predict... even with my powers," Darien replied. "It depends on how the energy Issei transferred into you develops and how your body will react to it. A form of telepathy is very likely, maybe over time telekinesis like you have it just seen from me. Some forms of magic are also a possibility. But we need to wait and see. It is to a great part depending on sheer chance and that it something even I can't foresee."
I looked over to see a girl with light-brown pigtails and a freckled face standing behind me. For armour she wore the potato fetch quest sacks. In her hands was a large wooden beginner's staff, the cherished symbol of a newbie mage.