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first of all I want to say that I enjoy your novel, I like the Mc kindhearted nature that being said I have a few issues that you might want to address ?. 1) despite mc previous knowledge being that he went to college and all even if he didn't study it his lack of common sense is terrible, I mean who makes some national tier potion and sells it dirt cheap. He didn't think about his unique background being the son of a goddess having an effect on everything he does, yes its kind and nice to give away these OP potions but think about all the alchemist that slave away trying to make a decent potion to earn a living and mc comes and destroyed all their hard work. Usually alchemy is a hard profession and people face many failures but mc has no such problems so what happens when in town A you worked hard to make a low grade potions and sell them for 8 copper but you hear a rumor that town B has a godlike potion being sold for the same price, I don't need to spell it out, yes it kind of him to do so, but his kindness is hurting others business and livelihood. 2) Power scale is weird, Idk how mc struggle against the goblin king and ran out of mana I get he is back to being 12 and all and he new to this world but I would imagine having all the mana should amount to some insane strength not to mention his previous knowledge as even the goddess said he'll be stronger than others; and the spider queen being 600 years old she should be a godlike existence maybe not as strong a dragon or other races in the same tier as her but she should definitely wipe out enemies like flies other than her contemporaries
Gostei muito, mais capítulo pf, ahhhh história muito boa, lance mais capítulo................................................................................................................................................................................
A good one, light read and slightly fast phase, and I enjoyed reading just dont make it toooooo OP a little bit challenge is good too.. Keep the chapter coming
I am really liking this novel. My favorite is the character of the main character. Great work so far. I hope mr. author keeps writing for a long time. Recommended ?
I'm betting this will go Premium :|I'm stating this now while not many people know yet. Is anyone willing to take the bet?140 Words huh, well then.I'm scared of primuem ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
It's my novel so I would like to think it's amazing. I hope you do as well and look forward to what happens. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
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Well, my review is kind of biased. This guy is a friend of mine so don't take my word when I saw thqt the story is good and it's worth a try. Try on your own and if you like it write a review and if you don't like it then also write a review about the things you are not satisfied with. It's helpful to the writer.
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Alright, so first is writing quality. The writing quality here is just amazing, hundreds of times better than most authors on the site. Just truly commendable.Second is stability of updates. I'm forced to give this a 4 because it is still too early to tell if the author will be updating on a regular schedule or not.Next is story development, which is just a bit too slow for me. I don't really know why, it's just slow in the beginning, but I promise it picks up more, so don't think it's that much of a bad thing.Next is story development, which seems really cliche right now. There isn't anything unique yet, so another 4.Finally, world background. Although the world background is really unique on the platform, I think it still needs to be more unique than some mainstream novels, because it seems like you're just replacing one ring with many rings. I'll be waiting for something unique to happen.Overall, a really good novel, would definitely recommend it casually.