Be a Female War Goddess in a Strange World

I feel this is a great novel, but from what ive read the biggest point of dissatisfaction(for myself included) is the portrayal of the relationship of the MC and the Female lead. The twist in their relationship comes off very sudden and unlikable. I think this is mostly because we spend the entire story up until this point not liking and being aggrivated by her. I think that if the reason behind her betrayal was something the MC agonized over more and maybe asked of her yet recieved an answer that set up room for a future relationship but didnt fully answer the question we would see her in a different light. This is more effective than the silent martyr style she used because we never liked her in the first place. The way I view what was written is that she was a cheating scumbag that was rightfully hurt by the MC, maybe tried to kill him, as well as a lucky piece of crap that benefited from his reincarnation. Then it turns out to be a red herring and she was actually trying to protect him. Maybe if she tried to reach out to him in the past life but he constantly denied her or if she told him she felt like she deserved to be punished but doesnt regret what she did. If the relationship wasnt shown as such an open and shut case of revenge I think it would have flown better.

Translation:Great translation quality, I haven't noticed any errors after 20 chaps. Updates:StandardStory: Story has progressed nicely and there will definitely be some world shaking battles in the future.Character: I like the mc, for once the mc isn't actually a transmigrator. I like his character, he is rational.  World:Decently unique world building, nothing extremely creative however this book is definitely not some xinxia book. It has its own world and plenty of room for further additions.

Only read 2 chapters. What a pity.It's a breath of fresh air that the mc became the attacker/invader in this novel but the mc also has a 100 crit modifier. So every item he picks up has an insanely high chance of getting the crit modifier.So his throwing spear or smth becomes an overpowered shuriken. His ragged chainmail becomes a fully plated armor. These things just ruins the novel. The mc doesn't do anything himself.Also, very small spoiler alert. The mc first raid is on a guy with a SSS-rank item which lets everything evolve as long you have enough experience. Which, means probably that the mc will acquire that item and evolve himself, instead evolving normally after battle or reaching certain conditions.Read at your own risk.

Just read the futunari chao and its was samng wrong and the mc is bland that he just goes everywhere being evil withiiut a reason buy only a physic of seven sins to push the plot forward I mean I like your world plot your setting and every thing else but this stunt pulls it's down the drain son what next a whole Continent field with disease spreading futunari that while soon conquer the world all because he wants to be the only man to **** all the women in the world well guest what he ist cause they got dick 2 he's just being too childish that even the joker would laugh and 3 just read grasping evil learn what evill means with morals while still having a personality and 4 this chapter was wrong on all levels I hope u don't running hedonist sword god my d Still haven't recovered yet sign road to kingdom has giving me th is of feeling but never gave me this kind of ****..........,...............                     

This story got potential.. Storyline is good. So far, world building still a little messy but it getting better.  I like it......................................... Aaa............ Lot..........................................................................

Well, my review is kind of biased. This guy is a friend of mine so don't take my word when I saw thqt the story is good and it's worth a try. Try on your own and if you like it write a review and if you don't like it then also write a review about the things you are not satisfied with. It's helpful to the writer.