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I was wondering why this resembled revenant so much lol, same author. Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
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another mediocre story just like the 'My Vampire System' and I am sure it will be popular again coz that's the standard/bar for the readers of this platform.
Had to drop this after reading some 30-40 chaps coz I just just couldn't get into the story. The quality that 99% of the novels here lack is 'Immersion' and that's the same for this novel too.
Let's see of this review stands or will it be deleted to like the ones on MVS ! Delete it even if you want, I won't be bothered to give another review nor the story another chance.
I like the setting of this world. I've always liked grim, insecure settings with gangs, violence, and crime, and this novel delivers all of them. The characters are likable and their personalities and relationships with one another feel organic and natural, which is very good. Recommended! I'll be eager to see more chapters.
Novel has an interesting story but the grammar is god awful and it has a generic mc who is bullied for being poor
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Has this been dropped been loving everything so far but noticed no new chapters where coming out anymore not sure if I want to use coin for more chapter if novels future is uncertain
Was so tired of reading stories about vampires and wolves and then I bumped into this novel. I would say this is the best book that I have read so far in my own opinion and I will be so glad to see a series of this book. I’m just disappointed by the fact that the writer seems to have stopped updating for now, please update the book.
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.