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This is extremely interesting unlike other people that have just read the synopsis and decided to make a review I have read up to a certain point.and I got to say it's not original but it's definitely very interesting. it has a mix of my hero Academia and They Boys one's an anime and the other one is a Amazon comic book hero TV show.they pretty much combined those two premises but it makes for a pretty interesting story so far and honestly I can't really complain too much about it.the writing is good the character design is fun even if there are some troops overall I'm not rolling my eyes when new characters are introduced. and overall and the most important thing,, it's very entertaining.I recommend people read this unless you're not into superhero type stuff.
So opinion of the first 20 chapters is not bad nor good just average and all 20 chapters take place in the span of 2 or 3 days so it is super slow paced and the fact it follows a 3 year old makes it worse
I will touch a few aspects of the novel:First comes story development - While some people prefer to see quick power up boosts, I appreciate the slow development of the story. I firmly believe MC needs time to develop even if he is a genius - it makes no sense if he suddenly becomes the strongest in the world.Second comes romance - From the former novel of the author I believe he is against useless harems with countless useless and weak wives everywhere. However, in 60 chapters only, MC already has "collected" 2 wives, making me wonder if it's a harem system instead of a villain one. Hopefully, author won't turn it into another generic harem novel, where every woman is completely useless and barely gets story time after he conquers her. As MC should already know about all outstanding women in advance (if I got it right he is in a world of a novel he has read in his previous life), maybe he has already set his eyes on a few women?Last aspect I want to talk about is the villain aspect - Although MC seems not to hesitate to kill some men, he seems to have a soft spot for women - he never considers killing the heroines of the protagonists he is hunting, insetad, he only tries to charm them first. While it seems to make him seem less vile, I guess its up to author how to set his characteristics as he doesn't really have to be a merciless mass murderer in order to be a villain.I feel it's too soon to comment about the system setting, as too much info is lacking - we don't know the criterions that need to be met in order to kill a protagonist, we don't know how the lottery works (somehow he always gets 2 prizes every time insetad of one) and so on, I just assume author will reveal it through the story.Keep up the good work and good luck to the author, it's a great story!
nice story i really like its pretty interesting so i hope u dont drop it ................... ... .. .. .. . .. ... .. .. .
AuthorWhy must you get me hooked and it isn’t even in the 17th chapterAmazing story I love the kind of duo personalities with when he is using his power and not using his power. I love sadistic characters who are really smart so this story is kind of in my favorites of all time. On the f###ing 16th chapter.
Haven’t read yet but the concept alone I’ m giving you 5 stars
Honestly it's kinda boring. Typical "being an animal and eating other animals to evolve" plot, except the MC has so many cheats (time travel, system, getting the abilities of the animals he kills), that there's basically never any real tension.
is this the end no more updates???? almost a week nowis this the end no more updates???? almost a week nowis this the end no more updates???? almost a week now
Its a meh fanfic. Nothing really different from other MMO fics out there. Only thing I find disappointing is the MC suddenly trusts Silent Night right after he was betrayed. Then she takes up as much screen time as our MC where I gave up continuing the fic. Freaking romantic interests killed the story for me.
Although I've only read a few chapters of the novel, I got to say that the author has done a pretty unique take on the road of cultivation. There are some things left to be desired though like grammar (which isn't really a big problem) and daily updates (would be great).I hope the author keeps up the great work.
Can we like have a normal talented beast tamer unlike this system based crap. We as readers are also beaming systematic will all this system novels creativity is out of the window