Same old returning from a tragic future story but this one lacks any real content. it's just get loot, beat an enemy, get better loot, beat a stronger enemy, repeat.
Question… is invayne really human?
A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
its good so far, need to introduce some stronger, anti hero villian type characters. which coukd challenge and may give motivation to mc to do better. for an mc to grow strong crises are needed.
hey author love your story keep it up it is very nice story can you pls upload a map of kingdoms sometime I got confuse by locations .and keep it up i will support with power stones
I'm being honest i like it i recommend 100%
writing again terrible writing skill, trash grammar, mess of pacing, bit of Yuri between female lead and her mother, (yes anything seksual between females it's Yuri)
YOU ARE BOUND TO BE HOOKED! Grammar is not an issue. Character design is great, world building is amazing. I mean, turns of events are not quite you are expecting but, hey! This is fun. Hahaha, I did an all-nighter for this review. So, give it a go! Surely, you will not regret it. Oh, did I mention that the plot is exemplary? On its infant stage, you can see that it has a lot of potentials. Keep it up with your great work, Author. I hope to see this on manga or anime someday! Great love. Keepsafe.
So,far book is looking good to me.But it is still too early to judge the characters.World background is superb.Hopefully,author will not drop it midway.
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