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This is absolutely great Highly recommend it, hits most the marks. The only problem i have with it is how he gets a extra girl And i absolutely hate harems unless their done in a specific way, although that part is my opinion. Cya ;p
alright now this book is ruined. I don't know why authors have to introduce love life in novels with these type of concepts. I think without love it would've been a wonderful novel. the girl is clearly forcing herself on Shawn for no reason at all. Then all that cringey blushing and all it gives me goosebumps. are these authors loners in real life and do not know women I mean they totally show that girls are like cats with curiosity they like to do whatever they want.
I know this story will go downhill but still is readable. Too ostentatious. read it only if you have nothing else to read. old-timers who can not find anything good to read can definitely read it once at super speed as it does not have much fanfare. Only 25 chapters in, this is just at the boundary of being trashed.
it's good? nowill I keep reading this? probablyWebnovel's standard of quality is so low lately that if novels aren't complete trash, I'm reading them.If this novel had been published a few years ago, I wouldn't have looked twice.
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Tsk tsk, you must go worship Fang Yuan. If you dare screw him over, you are simply courting death. Good work making use of the unexplained lotus people, my theory is that was Spectral Soul and Red Lotus collaborating in sealing the immortal zombie and not provoking heaven will or just an arrangement.
this is a great story and while there are some mistakes along the way with writing and side characters which was already mentioned and addressed so this is great. if I could pay for more updates I would
First of all I'm rating it 5 overall because the parameter is based on webnovel's contents. But, the novel surely deserve it. From the main character to plot and character growth is just my cup of tea. Even though the story progress slowly, it only makes everything taste sweeter when things finally happen. Totally love the build up. Sure, I hate the hierarchy in the kingdom including the 'supposedly' main characters. But, I'm sure Yvonne will do something about it. So, thank you author for a great story ??
I actually didn't have to burn any of my brain cells to read this novel.................................................................................
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