Hello Author here!First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook). I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably...Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore. Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms. Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.
It is a great novel. Can't wait to continue reading??
The writing style and the plot of this novel are just flawless...The only problem I have with this novel is that there are only a few chapters to binge read...
I love this book been following it since chapter 100 and I've not regretted it ever since but I would like to ask a question I hope ye li doesn't get stronger than Zhou Fan seeing as he said that karma path could be stronger than cultivation path or is he going to learn how to combine all those paths that he's seen into cultivation so he can continue to grow stronger
chapters are too short but very catchy to read
This is a true hero, helpful, working hard to progress, and giving consequences to actions that are not good. Romance, with cultivation, and progression. I need one of those rings. Something to help dreams come true.
Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.
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Well first I'm second xD. As of now I have only read the first chapter, and I liked it a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's a good story and i really enjoy reading it. Although sometimes i feel the story is too safe, no hard conflict at all...maybe the author just wants to highlight the love story between FL and ML
One of the best novels which I am really glad got translated"This work is really great for those who seek new idea, creativity and tired of the same old model. This novel has a logical power level unlike other ... dao, odds are that it is not a Xianxia."Evolving into a new type of life form is a process of changing in thought, ideology of emotion and world view.Opposite to the kind of story where the MC only cultivate and level up (Maybe for hundred, thousand or millennium) until he/she become invincible, become the omniscient and omnipotent. However, if you remove the super power then the protagonist doesn't change much (You may argue that the MC become more mature or the kind of that, THAT RIGHT! Every writer know what is character development thus there is no way the MC character remains the same as the beginning). What I want to stress here is that after the MC becomes invincible, gets married and haves offspring, achieves the "Happy ever after ending". There is almost no difference between the mortal at the beginning and the omnipotent being at the end, except for some kind of special power level- cultivation.Things are different in this book, It clearly explains the process of one kind of life form evolving into a higher one. The things you lose and the things you need. You mentality and worldview, how much your thought process changes etc... At certain level, there no longer exist the concept of good and evil, only one own stand point.
What a cheap copy of THE AUTHOR'S POV. Though not exactly the same but almost the same. There is no flow in the story, the writing is messed up, although I liked reading it, something about this story doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars or 4 stars.