DreamLord14Pmi
i interested in this story cuz of ring mc concept and romance tag and profile pic of the book.i expected some good development between ring and the owner girl as they grow alongside eachothe.but story stared to become boring after few chapters and still after 20 something chapter i don't get wat i wanted or expected like a good adventure and relationship MC IS A WASTE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY i hope you good luck for this story
Author is very helpful in answering questions/comments troughout the story but this review is about the book not the author.Warning- some spoilersIm at chapter 50- sometimes the mc care about people(he kills his own faction guy for raping women) then 2 chapters later he force 20 people to suicide. One second he make a deal with the most cruel god to sacrifice one hundred souls then the next he want to save 4 prisoners.. This MC sooo wishy washy mentality its a jokeSecond he is constantly abandoned and hunted by everyone and everywhere he goes, in the first 30 chaps women spit on him, push his head into ground and whip him and then men pee on him...After he survive that he meet a women who told him she was watching everything and made a deal with her to help her lmao without even knowing anything about her nor the world he is in.. he trust to easy.. not to mention im at chapter 50 yet he doesnt even know how to use basic mana/how to fight /how to use his powers/how to use his system.Also EVERYONE he meets call him newbie because he is stupid and doesnt know anything yet he does 0 eFfort to learn anything.Sigh my conclusion great story but worst worst wordt most stupid frustrating mc possible
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Pretty decent story so far. One thing I found annoying is how easy it is to steal cars which makes no sense for a more technology advanced society. The first car that was taken at least had the pretext of a spare key in the visor, after that people are stealing dozens of cars right and left. Even the heavily armed police vehicle was taken away without issue.
