I refuse to give a good review when the translator auterates the novel, such as altering the characters' names..........................................
Frankly, the chapters are great when you binge read, but the problem is the instability of updates. Amen.
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I truly like the idea and the concept of this... the beginning was very good... there were some grammatical errors but we can turn a blind eye to them... as the story progressed I feel the relation of mc a bit forced... his sudden change of personality makes me feel like he is a hypocrite and its confusing, it happened many times, the author mentioned it many times that what his aim was by (A/N) and it irked me many times because people should be able to get what you are trying to convey by reading story only... as we progressed I started feeling I was reading a low tier cultivation novel except it is a magical world... And trust me I have read my fair share of cultivation novels and I could predict what is going to happen, so my thrill ends as soon as the author tries to bring the cultivation type of deal...
As writter putted hours of hard work and sweat blood on book, it's unfair if I rare my with five star. I am new writter not experience but confidence on my story line. some change i had made due to guidelines of web novel. li cheng = Alexji xiu = CristinaLast Don't forget vote book only takes one tap your but heartily motivates author.
Grammer is bad and story is all over the place and adding to that there is a huge lack of information the mc is strong because he is strong how he got there dosent seem to say
The stroy goos the oath is best i seen how can he like this at all i like it i see this is the novelbdst of course i guess so good to you i see
It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.
amazing novel has tons of potential to be in top 10 already better than some of the novel there now good action and plot and not really overpowered
I hate anything gay! Dont just post gay story.
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