The world is generic, there are constantly characters that try to be mysterious and do something that is commendable for the protagonist even if they are "enemies
The author's writing style is both elegant and accessible. The story is a true work of art, and I got completely absorbed in the world the author has created.
A really interesting Romance novel. Has potential. Just added to library
absolutely godly , write more , this is a total abomination masterpiece
Really great story with an MC that isn't a whiny wimp and has to work for what he gets. The translation speed is great, 3 chapters a day but the trade-off is that there are sometimes errors like incorrect character pronouns or different spelling of their names (sometimes in the same chapter).
Liking Daniel’s character so far. The plot and writing quality is great, this book has a lot of potential to grow a big fanbase, keep it up?
A very interesting read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.
Fan of these type of novels, this guy who ever he is keep going like most of the novels don't keep me connected after chapter 1 or whatever you call it but this was something which kept me connected. I haven't completed it yet but I'm sure the ending will be crazy. Keep going. #999
ohh, not bad, there are issues but i am still enjoying it, i can see that the author is slowly improving with each chapter which is nice to see.
This is a hidden gem, thank God I was the one to find it. Gave it a go, been a long while since I found something good on this platform.
This has been one of the best novel I read on this app so far. The writing quality is good, barely any misspell, the world building is interesting. Though I gotta say many things are many things I found quite confusing regarding how this new world came to be or how they society works. I guess I just had to follow through and findind out these stuffs as the story goes on and on. Thanks for this great story.
The book has a captivating beginning with revenge and a marriage of convenience plot. Smooth and easy writing style with enough details provided where needed. The FL is strong headed and she knows what to do. She has her destiny in her own hands. Updates are stable and I liked how the characters are being portrayed. Good work author ??