story gets better as you go on, liking it more and more
The story seem interesting judging by the first few chapter.
You guys can drop what you think about the book, ion mind harsh comments, I just want an honest review ?Thank u
Pardon. Am just a critic. Am be honest on this one. This is my second review on this seven novel and am just ? I would yell "THE UPDATING SCHEDULE SUCKS!" For real, for real. I hope you fix that soon or else, am gonna drop reading this. KEEP WRITING!
Awesome plot, although not finished. The beginning of the plot is great as well.
cool world building and reading it i can feel it will be a dark tragedy type STORY
I Appreciate your work you are a great thinker and has immense potential A great story.....one must read
Bro I'm itching for more chapters release now!
This has one of the best potentials ive seen in a novel in a while. It could become great with the way the writer is producing the story. Props to him
Mashing up ideas from "Crime & Punishment
"was a hateful, spiteful, and jaded teenager with a sour outlook in life"thats'sthe description of the MC, and it's the MC who is making more difificult for me to keep reading this novel.Besides that, almost not gramatical errors (i think I only found one in 28 chapters), some descriptions are a bit repetitive some times, but I've found that's quite common in the novels here (I'm gonna gues that if enough readers have a low attention span, that's some kind of requirements).The story is progressing with a good rhythm (at least for me), the world is not very much described, but that feels logical cause everything is happening in a very specific location; but we get some glympses here and there. His system...it allows him short burst of being OP but with a high cost; and actually something that I wonder is if he will have to devour half continent to have some decent stats (he just have raised his mana stat to 35, and the person with the next lowest mana stat is over 600...5 point per life seems a bit too low, at least if the conversion remains at 1 point per stat increase).All in all, if you can get along with the MC, is an entertaining story, and i really hope I'll come to edit this review in the future and say that the MC becomes less insufferable after some chapters.
Awesome book ???I like the story and all the interactions between the characters and the FL learning from past mistakes ?