The novel is quite good and i am looking forward to reading it.The only problem is that the writing but it can easily solved by going to another site to read it.
mtl trash
Besides my review I'll leave this rating system for those that want a quick scale. [Warning] This novel is heavily rushed and basically dropped. While it does have an ending it leaves much to be desired. My review [Pending as of 12/12/23] explains my grievances.
Everything from, chapter 1- around 900 (where the age of gods starts)
Characters/character development: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
World building: 9/10
Imagery: 9/10
Enjoyment: 8/10
Overall: 8.8/10
Everything after that new age, chapter 900-finale.
Characters/character development: 6/10
Plot: 3/10
World building: 3/10
Imagery: 8/10
Enjoyment: 2/10
Overall: 4/10
I don't usually review so fast but I really like this lot
teaching me about life and making me laugh
which I guess that's what she wants saw dedication on Amazon sample for earlier stories
3 chapters a day?????????
That is what i call heaven, I love it!
keep going, author!
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Seems a bit unfair that I'm allowed to rate my own work, but goodreads allows it so it should be okay. Anyway, this story is awesome! From prose to world building to character development, it's all really good!
(Totally not biased btw)
Read it now!
Hi Jessica how are you? I have read this story so many times I know it now . I just wanted to ask if you republished this on GreatNovel under The title Broken Alpha and Luna ??
Wonderful book... Thoroughly enjoy it.
Excellent!!! Awesome storyline, written well, very interesting and held my attention from beginning to end. Keep up the good work author I will be looking at more of your completed works.
Awesome book !! Love the dragons !! Is there going to be a sequel ?
Such a good read! Really enjoyed every chapter of this book!
Has this very promising and engaging story been abandoned?